Here's a song I did on Noteworthy Composer. It's got Chinese lyrics, but the title's "Waiting". Please give suggestions... (BTW, the words might not show up, depending on if your computer does Chinese or not)
Waiting

Lyrics:

等待
BY：RIYOKU SAKIMORI

心中的回音象飞鹅的翅膀，
象海鸟，飞往大海的波浪。
泪水的歌声是云后面的阳光，
和等待雨停的太阳一样。

我站在泪水的歌声中，
等待这雨后的彩虹。
我的海鸟要飞多长
才能达到大海之旁？

等待你，回到我 的身边。
等待你的爱，等见到你的脸。
等待你，请不要随风去，
我会永远在这里，等待你。。。

INSTRUMENTAL

你的温柔是美丽地彩虹，
挂在个蓝色地天空中。
夜空的月亮是你的笑容，
像彩虹下温暖地春风。

无数的年，无数的天，
你记不记得我的脸？
我会站在风雨之中，
等待你的彩虹和笑容。

等待你，回到我 的身边。
等待你的爱，等见到你的脸。
等待你，请不要随风去，
我会永远在这里。。。

INSTRUMENTAL

应为我会很想你。。。
请不要忘记。。。

your music sounds really like Japanese rather than Chinese, to me at least. feel kind of like cliche as well.

Japanese and Chinese are very similar, there isn't much of any difference anyway...And I'm Chinese.

sorry, i didn't realize you're Chinese, since both your name and music sound Japenese to me. there's much difference between Chinese and Japanese folk or even ancient songs, to me at least and that's why i thought you were Japanese. the lyrics itself is really cliche, but your music sound little better than that although it feels like having nothing to do with the lyrics anyway...