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#1149343 - 04/07/08 05:50 PM
Adagio D Major
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Registered: 04/07/08
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Adagio D Major Feedback is welcome, enjoy!
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#1149344 - 04/08/08 12:23 AM
Re: Adagio D Major
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Very nice, though is it in B major? Sounds more like D major to me. Sounds evocative of a Mozart slow movement.
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#1149345 - 04/13/08 09:32 PM
Re: Adagio D Major
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#1149346 - 04/17/08 07:33 PM
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yes, very well done.. anytime anyone compares you to amadeus, be very happy.. i agree w/ 8ude
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#1149347 - 04/18/08 05:38 AM
Re: Adagio D Major
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Sounds good. I like the melodies and you have a nice accompaniment too, with some interesting harmonies.
If I could suggest something it would be to make the opening them resolve back to the home key a little more, and to repeat it before moving into the next section.
Some of the phrases seem a little odd in length, as if they could do with some extra bars, so sometimes it is a little abrupt when the phrase ends.
But it's a lovely style - I'd be interested to see the sheet music if you have a PDF.
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#1149348 - 04/24/08 02:16 PM
Re: Adagio D Major
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Hey John, yeah agree with you on bringing back the opening theme, this was just a rough recording and i had some other things in mind too, i learned to play myself, well i had class when i was 6 for a year or two when i lived in Ukraine but cant remember it but i guess that helped abit, just picking up playing and trying to compose, will try to work out sheet music and will post it, thanks for your time!
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