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Hello, here I show my short piano composition - I just start work on it, so I will continue this slowly. Now I would like to ask your opinion about this piece. Thanks for comments :-) Sincerely, Sedonepix http://www.badongo.com/audio/12919753 ps: English is not my original language, sorry for possible mistakes.
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I really really like the beginning, I was quite surprised with how much you could do with the octaves in the LH. Halfway through when it changes, I didn't care as much for the octaves staying in one place. ?? But maybe you could still use the RH melody, just move the LH around a bit so it doesn't sit on one octave quite as long at a stretch? Again, I really like the start of this!!!!!!!
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Thank you for your comment, musiccr8r. I will try to improve my LH.
And I will continue soon :-).
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http://www.badongo.com/audio/13064955 the complete (?) "Silveria". please, comment - it is very interesting for me to know what do you think about it. thank you for hearing.
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Very nice! I like the composition and the playing is excellent.
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thank you, Joe! for me it is very nice to hear it.
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I second musiccr8r. My favourite moment, actually, is 0:17-0:22. It's the way you played those repeated As that caught my attention. Good job
Tar Viturawong Amateur composer and pianist Known on YouTube as pianoinspirationverbis defectis musica incipit
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sedonepix, Just beautiful. I just can't stand rich, big, but boring pieces (I have to say this). You can find tons of them. This piece, though, is full of emotions, little story I wanna hear. Instead of closing the window after 20 sec. I just want more and more... You have to finish it and make it longer soon (did I say please? ! TTYS, Miljan
"Strive for excellence, not perfection." H. JB
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Hi all! This my post is not about "Silveria", wich is still under work btw, but about my new composition "The wind in Utrecht": http://www.box.net/shared/3qz1drleyl (this is my black and white impression about visiting Utrecht). Thanks in advance. sedonepix
Last edited by sedonepix; 06/08/09 06:21 AM.
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Yeah! definitely well composed. Very inspiring!
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Hi all! "The one story": http://www.box.net/shared/jm4ut5ouqsthanks for comments, if you will like to give some.
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