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#1151937 - 03/10/08 03:57 PM Criticism of compositions
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I'm trying to understand how criticism even has a role in composition. That is to say,

I personally think many people fail to make a distinction between the objective and the subjective. Thus, many hurt feelings are created when people's works are criticized.

If the composer starts out by saying: "I am choosing to apply the objectively observable traits of independence of voices (as defined by abundant use of thirds and sixths and their inversions) and the sonata allegro form, could you help me to adhere to these rules by making suggestions or criticisms?"

On the other hand, if the composer has absolutely no desire to adhere to any objective set of rules---what place does criticism have? What possible use could negative comments possibly be to the composer? I could imagine suggestions such as: "Why don't you try ADDING such and such" to the piece, but saying that you don't like a part of the piece or what not...

I just don't get it. How can it be useful? To ANYONE? It's never been useful to me...not once. That is to say, if someone says: "Take that out of the piece" it isn't very helpful, because I very well might have wanted it IN the piece, darn it. But if someone says: "Hey, why doncha try some more crazy rhythm and harmony" I think: "ya know what, that sounds like fun" and then I try it and I become a better composer.

So...tell me. How on earth can negative criticism possibly play a "positive" role in developing a composer? Other than perpetuating centuries of broken creative spirits taking out vengeance on the next generation, of course? =)

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#1151938 - 03/10/08 03:58 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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#1151939 - 03/10/08 04:10 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Criticism is not, used correctly, "negative" -- it's a detailed examination of something. Music can serve two diametrically opposed purposes: it can be used to entertain others or it can be written for the sole benefit and enjoyment of the composer. While these are not mutually exclusive, it seems that music written for the composer alone enjoys a smaller audience.

So, if someone suggests to you that a particular aspect of your music is not appealing (which would seem to be the message behind "remove it") then you know one of two things: at least one person does not like something you have chosen to put into your music and, you like it or you wouldn't have put it in there.

There are lots of ways to provide feedback. One is to say what you don't like (and this tends to be what you get from people who are asked what they think of your music without knowing you or your sensitivities). The other way is to suggest improvements (but, again, that's an improvement from the one hearing the music).

As someone who has been on both sides of this discussion (both as a performer and as a composer) I can tell you that it's necessary to develop a thick skin if you are to be successful.

Let's look at your example. Suppose I know what you are trying to accomplish and that you are writing music with a specific goal. Then I can say, if asked, I don't think you accomplished your goal. That's a simple but not terribly helpful answer -- it implies that I cannot frame a more powerful and cogent response (which may, indeed, be the case). Or, I could do a detailed analysis of your work (a "criticism") and show where you did and did not accomplish your goal. More helpful, but still doesn't tell you what you need to do to fix it.

The real question is why should I do your job for you? My job, as a listener, is to respond to what you write. I could make suggestions ("...you know, an Fm might work better here...") but that doesn't mean that I understand why you choose what you did or why an Fm was not the primary choice there. I might not hear what you hear.

Bottom line, even "negative criticism" has a place -- it lets you know that, for at least one person, you failed to make a piece of music stimulating/entertaining or whatever.

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#1151940 - 03/10/08 04:15 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Well that one person doesn't matter then. The composer is speaking to himself and anybody who happens to like it. Enjoyment of music is so intensely subjective that I just can't see the value of negative criticism...at all. It's like saying, "you know, the fact that you used a slightly bent spoon for eating your cereal this morning just doesn't do it for me."

For at least one person, myself, rap (in most cases) fails to entertain me. So does ensemble jazz. Would people who write such music find my criticism valuable? Hardly. On a smaller scale, people within the same genre will also find negative criticism useless. The musical landscape is just much too large for it to be otherwise.


I suppose, with the right attitude (which I posess) one can use any kind of criticism, negative or otherwise, to "think outside the box," however this relies on the recipient of the criticism being a particularly steely person in the face of harsh comments. I personally think this lends credence to the idea that the person criticizing may really be inflating their own ego rather than making a genuine attempt to help the composer in question develop. Maybe I'm wrong---but I've known of too many persons whose creative drives have been severely hampered by negative criticism to remain silent on the issue.

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#1151941 - 03/10/08 06:46 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I don't necessarily think people say negative things in order to boost their ego.

I think the opposite is actually true. People share their work looking to boost their own ego. When you've come to finish a peice and you decide to share it, it's probably because you think you've done a wonderful job and you want everyone to pat you on the back and agree. "Whoa this is great!"..."You're so talented". I don't see how comments like that are helpful either if that isn't your real thoughts. If anything I think that's more damaging.

If you make music for yourself and don't want the opinions of other people than don't post it. If you post asking for opinions however, don't cry about it when you get one that you don't agree with.

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#1151942 - 03/11/08 06:57 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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What's the purpose of musical composition? If the composer is writing for themselves, then no subjective criticism is worthwhile.

If the composer is trying to achieve some form of communication to anyone else, then surely subjective criticism on the impact of the composition on a listener is valuable to the composer, so that they can understand how their composition is perceived by others.

I might think my composition is perfect, but if no one else can stand to listen to it, then I've got a pretty big problem. And I'll only find that out by listening to criticism/remarks from other people.
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#1151943 - 03/11/08 08:28 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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John,

Precisely what I was trying to say, and far more concisely!

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#1151944 - 03/11/08 11:27 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by Zwischenzug:
I don't necessarily think people say negative things in order to boost their ego.

I think the opposite is actually true. People share their work looking to boost their own ego. When you've come to finish a peice and you decide to share it, it's probably because you think you've done a wonderful job and you want everyone to pat you on the back and agree. "Whoa this is great!"..."You're so talented". I don't see how comments like that are helpful either if that isn't your real thoughts. If anything I think that's more damaging.

If you make music for yourself and don't want the opinions of other people than don't post it. If you post asking for opinions however, don't cry about it when you get one that you don't agree with. [/b]
I suppose there are some individuals for whom not even a productive suggestion would be valuable--all they seek is admiration.

Regardless of the individual posting the composition, I still don't see how negative criticism can be useful.

This thread is about negative criticism---not whether someone ought to post a composition if they aren't prepared to take criticism.

I recognize that there are individuals who claim negative criticism is useful to them. However I remain skeptical even in those cases.

I can recall talking with some individuals on other forums who frequently post their work, get negative criticism, and then have a lull in creativity for months because of it. Then they meekly explain to me that it's good and they want the criticism. Personally I think this is outright masochism....throwing pearls to swine kind of thing. (where the swine are the critics). So---while I can see some individuals might have the right attitude and so forth...I still think the whole practice of negative criticism is ultimately unproductive and at worst, very damaging to certain individuals.

I have been fortunate enough not to have this happen to me in music...so when I see other individuals receive certain comments, I become skeptical and sincerely hope they can continue to create despite what is said to them.

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#1151945 - 03/11/08 11:27 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Think of it this way - what's the point of hearing only critique that you want to hear? If you only want people to tell you how great you are, then it becomes meaningless. If you ever expect to learn and grow as a composer (or in any other discipline for that matter), you need to learn to accept feedback and criticism, take it in stride, and ultimately learn from it.

You think the great composers never had to deal with criticism? I can't remember the exact quote, but Haydn (or was it Albrechtsberger?) ripped Beethoven apart, saying "he'll never do anything in the proper style". Did Beethoven go off and pout in a corner? Hardly... Rubinstein completely ripped Tchaikovsky's first piano concerto to shreds - did he just give up? No, they picked themselves up, dusted themselves off, and did better the next time...
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#1151946 - 03/11/08 12:02 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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8ude is right. Critics can be wrong, of course, but that doesn't mean they're always wrong. A good teacher will both encourage and occasionally discourage a student and they are both useful functions if the student is willing to learn. If the student is too rebellious, that doesn't necessarily mean they're wrong either, but it does mean that they will have to work doubly hard to develop taste and elegance on their own in their compositions and be darned convincing in their approach. Maybe "taste" is old an old fashioned term, but my main criticism of most new music (professional and amateur) is a lack of taste and a lack proportion and a lack of growth within a work. Unfortunately way too many people are satisfied with static work - work that goes nowhere and leads to no real conclusion, or worse still, bombastic displays of empty substance.

The best way to learn on your own is to listen to music that moves you and find out why it moves you. Personally, I love Tchaikovsky, the Finnish modernists of the 1920s, Scriabin and others. In the last few years I've come to know Rameau's operas and have been so often in awe of how that man could accomplish so much in his music with the least effort. And much of his work points 100 years and farther into the future. He was a visionary, and sometimes severely criticized. Even when he was famous such criticism would sometimes lead him to write new parts into his operas - and take some out.

Sorry for the rambling.
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#1151947 - 03/11/08 05:25 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by Zom:
I can recall talking with some individuals on other forums who frequently post their work, get negative criticism, and then have a lull in creativity for months because of it. Then they meekly explain to me that it's good and they want the criticism. Personally I think this is outright masochism....throwing pearls to swine kind of thing. (where the swine are the critics). So---while I can see some individuals might have the right attitude and so forth...I still think the whole practice of negative criticism is ultimately unproductive and at worst, very damaging to certain individuals.
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I haven't been around much, but did post some less than positive comment recently so this whole thread may be about me. Please correct me if I'm wrong (not that I really care).

I've been on both sides of this as well. I've worked with a composers who made suggestions, but frankly their suggestions didn't sit well with me. More recently I've worked with a local composer who looked over a choral piece of mine and about 90% of his negative comments were spot on. Some of his comments were of the "this part doesn't really suit the text well" variety. Others were of the "I don't think this melody is strong enough" variety. Others had to do with structure, harmony, voice leading. In other words I was paying for his comments and really felt I was getting my money's worth! I was thrilled!!!!!! I'm proud of the piece that resulted and yes it will have my name on it, but in my heart I'll give a lot of credit to Ben Allaway. He kicked my butt and the result was a far superior piece of music.

Some of the comments in this thread lead me to believe that some of you think that your initial effort is your truest expression. It may be that, but that doesn't mean it's effective music. C'mon guys you've got to be self critical and be willing to accept criticism from others. I liked epf's comment about doing the work for you. You'll get far better criticism if you're taking lessons and paying for them. Certainly superior to posting here. But if you do post here accept that you may hear opinions that are at odds with your own, otherwise why post, to collect attaboys???

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#1151948 - 03/11/08 08:09 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Let me describe where I am coming from. I personally believe that criticism, as you are rightly pointing out, CAN be valuable if the person receiving and indeed ASKING for the criticism has the right attitude. I don't think that's a bad thing at all.

However, when neither party is aware of what could happen, in other words, say the composer happens to be a kid who is used to being encouraged, and comes to a forum and gets criticized. He had no idea that was going to happen, and it might really hurt his creative drive.

This happened to me when I was 16---thankfully not in music. I got on the internet, posted my work (quite naively) and got intense criticism. Add to that that the critics themselves rarely, if ever, posted their work, a trend that I find fairly common in music forums as well. Even though they didn't post their work, I was very hurt by their comments and found it difficult to be inspired for a long time.

Later on, when I was about 17, I began studying music and piano on my own. I took a few guitar lessons, which consisted entirely of encouragement and basically making me aware I was allowed to explore music entirely on my own. This really set me on fire and I started to teach myself scales on the piano...the rest is history and now I can't imagine my life without spontaneous creation of piano music. Throughout my development of that hobby I also had the good fortune of receiving encouragement and suggestions (with honest observations of where my music was lacking) throughout, and I'm sure my music is better because of it.

All without a single comment that suggested my music was bad, or not strong, or not notable or any other unnecessary remarks (in my opinion).

So, I don't mean to project my own experience on everyone else, but I do perceive that every so often on internet forums, the people posting their work do not know what to expect (and may naively expect encouragement or praise), and the critics are not sensitive enough to realize they might be talking to a young person who might be hurt by their comments. I just think the entire concept of receiving criticism on an internet forum is flawed. I think criticism should only be doled out with caution, and only by request.

And EVEN THEN, I think it can be done without any unnecessary negatives.

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#1151949 - 03/11/08 08:37 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Zom, when I listen to works posted here I do take into account at least what I perceive is the background and likely training of the person posting. I haven't been overwhelmed by anything I've heard so far and much of it sounds like beginning steps, but not always. A lot of it shows a real desire to "get it right" and it takes some bravery to post something for all to hear. So far I've only posted one piece, but I've been trying to finish another piece I'd like to post. My problem with it is the very ending is causing me a lot of grief and I keep trying to get it a little more "right". I'm hoping people like it, but if not, I'll just listen to any comments and see if they help me or not.
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#1151950 - 03/11/08 09:52 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by Zom:
I'm trying to understand how criticism even has a role in composition....

So...tell me. How on earth can negative criticism possibly play a "positive" role in developing a composer? Other than perpetuating centuries of broken creative spirits taking out vengeance on the next generation, of course? =) [/b]
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Criticism is not, used correctly, "negative" -- it's a detailed examination of something.

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Couple of comments...

I think there is a distinction between the words "critique" and "criticism".

According to Microsoft Word:

"Critique" = analysis, assessment, evaluation, account, review, appraisal. The word "criticize" is also included as a synonym for critique, but I think that's meant in the sense as analysis rather than dissapproval. Critique, then, is a wholly neutral word.

"Criticism" can mean all of the above, but in addition it may also mean censure; disapproval, disparagement, condemnation, denigration. Those are negative in nature. For that reason, I think a lot of people consider "criticism" to have a negative connotation, at least more so than a "critique. A critique could point out both strengths and weaknesses.

I think a balanced critique pointing out a composition's strengths (assuming, hopefully, there are some) along with specific suggestions to fix percieved weaknesses, would be very helpful.

The hardest thing about composing is, there are rules, but the rules are made to be broken. And there is no boiler plate one size fits all form into which we can - or should - fit every piece of music. The more creative you are, the more musical ideas you have, the harder it is to fit your music all together.

I just read an article about Quincy Jones. He studied with Nadia Boulanger who taught Aaron Copland and Philip Glass. She told Jones:

"The more boundaries you set, the more freedom you have."

Jones says:

"I didn't want to hear that, man, but she's right."

My question is the same as someone else once asked here, where exactly are these boundaries and rules written? Are they in black and white or unwritten? Where can we find "do this, don't do that" / "this is right" "this is wrong" ??? As I recall, that person never got a real answer to that question.

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#1151951 - 03/11/08 10:28 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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"The more boundaries you set, the more freedom you have."

Jones says:

"I didn't want to hear that, man, but she's right."

My question is the same as someone else once asked here, where exactly are these boundaries and rules written? Are they in black and white or unwritten? Where can we find "do this, don't do that" / "this is right" "this is wrong" ??? As I recall, that person never got a real answer to that question.

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Precisely. There aren't any boundaries, or rules. Do you suppose the people who wrote the books about 4 part harmony had any rule books to consult? It all stems from certain ideals. And it is only if the composer explicitly strives for those ideals that there is anything even approaching a "rule" for writing music. And it can be debated all day whether certain ideals (such as 4 part harmony) really do contribute to the musical effectiveness of a piece. If you're TRYING to sound exactly like Mozart then yeah...those rules would be helpful. But if you're just composing to write beautiful music---they're worth just about as much as toe clippings in the garbage can.

I'm not sure if I agree with boundaries creating freedom. I think it is FUN sometimes to create boundaries for myself (that is, choosing to create rules for myself), but I generally find I am the most creative when I don't consider any rules at all. It is interesting to alternate between the two states of mind. But I would never want to remain squarely in the "rules" camp for long, I don't think. Especially because there are simply no objective bases for such rules. They are all nonsense---they are basically just games. "Let's see how many thirds and sixths we can shovel into an ABACA mould!" You know? I think it's silly personally. But fun with the right mindset.

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#1151952 - 03/12/08 08:40 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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The funny thing is that there have been books of "rules" over time. Fux's Gradus ad Parnassum provided the rules for composing counterpoint. This was used by Leopold Mozart to train his son, Wolfgang. Beethoven used it and actually wrote a summary of it for his students. Haydn and Brahms both used it and their annotated copies of Fux's work can still be found in museums. Rameau wrote about the difference between harmony and counterpoint providing instruction and "rules."

Having boundaries is not a bad thing. We work within certain constraints because that is what allows what we write to be considered "music" as opposed to random notes or noise. But, when we know the rules we also know when we can break them and what effect breaking the rules will have on the listener. Even atonal or serial music has "rules" -- albeit very few.

If, as some assert, music is "organized sound" then it's important that the organization be what the brain perceives as music.

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#1151953 - 03/12/08 08:46 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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There's a big difference with criticism in a forum like this and criticism from someone you are standing talking to.

It's a sad fact that if I don't know the person I'm criticizing, and I believe I'll probably never meet them, then I'm far more likely to be tough in my criticism. That's why flame wars blow up in forums over seemingly trivial matters: if you don't have any personal engagement with the person you're dealing with you will be much more forceful. So I think criticism on the internet is very different to criticism in real life.

Certainly if you have the chance, then taking account someone's background is helpful in delivering criticism in way which the receiver will listen to and understand. Again, that's not always possible on a forum such as this.

Of course, helpful criticism is more likely to be accepted and therefore to have a positive affect than negative criticism. But as others have pointed out, I don't think that means there is no place for negative criticism.

Some creations are just bad, or don't move me, or don't do anything for me, or sound terrible, and it may be difficult for me (or someone else acting as a critic) to explain exactly why. If someone posts something here which I find really juvenile or simplistic, or just plain rubbish, then I won't respond as personally I don't think it would be beneficial to do so. However there's no point allowing someone to think there compositions are wonderful if they plainly aren't, so some time, someone or other has to give some pretty tough feedback, hopefully in a way which will be accepted.
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#1151954 - 03/12/08 10:28 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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There aren't any boundaries, or rules. Do you suppose the people who wrote the books about 4 part harmony had any rule books to consult? It all stems from certain ideals. And it is only if the composer explicitly strives for those ideals that there is anything even approaching a "rule" for writing music. And it can be debated all day whether certain ideals (such as 4 part harmony) really do contribute to the musical effectiveness of a piece. If you're TRYING to sound exactly like Mozart then yeah...those rules would be helpful. But if you're just composing to write beautiful music---they're worth just about as much as toe clippings in the garbage can.[/b]
If you choose to ignore the boundaries and rules as they've been laid out in countless music theory books that's a choice you make. As someone who's composed classical and pop style music I would argue that it's foolish to ignore this information (BTW, go ahead and follow the links in my sig and listen to my music). The rules of voice leading have nothing to do with sounding like Mozart or Bach and have everything to do with composing music that's both effective and elegant. So Rule for breaking the music theory rules #1. If you don't want to sound elegant go ahead and break the rules. An example might be if you're composing a storm scene into a piece, lots of parallel fifths might be very effective in highlighting the drama of such a moment. However, you specifically mentioned composing beautiful music. Composers have been striving to write beauty into their music from the beginning of music. Music History tells us that humans have come to the conclusion that Parallel fifths are, in general, not beautiful, so they are to be avoided. Parallel octaves are a bit different, in composing vocal harmonies they are to be avoided because if they're not perfectly in tune they're ugly, but in instrumental music (where intonation is less of achallenge) it's viewed as one instrument doubling another to highlight a harmonic.

What's obvious to me is that you are interested in composing music, but have eschewed formal training because it might limit your freedom. Which brings me to point #2.
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I'm not sure if I agree with boundaries creating freedom. I think it is FUN sometimes to create boundaries for myself (that is, choosing to create rules for myself), but I generally find I am the most creative when I don't consider any rules at all. It is interesting to alternate between the two states of mind. But I would never want to remain squarely in the "rules" camp for long, I don't think. Especially because there are simply no objective bases for such rules. They are all nonsense---they are basically just games. "Let's see how many thirds and sixths we can shovel into an ABACA mould!" You know? I think it's silly personally. But fun with the right mindset. [/b]
What's obvious is that you haven't actually tried the rules camp. You're too busy trying to evaluate the "Objective basis" (note spelling correction) for the rules. It is your opinion that there is no objective basis for such rules, but 4+ centuries of music history would argue otherwise. And yet the presence of such rules has not in any way impeded the evolution of music. Numerous composers have developed their own individual methods for adhereing to and breaking "the Rulz." I'm willing to bet that in the vast majority of cases the process of learning to break "the Rulz" began with learning them.

As for the concept of freedom, think about it. A blank page and no Rulz is almost intimidating. The moment you write anything down you begin limiting your choices, whether by the key or style of music or whatever. The very act of notating music impacts your available choices for the music to follow. It's entirely possible to write a pastiche that includes snippets that sound like Bach, Mozart, Chopin, the Beatles, Disturbed, Fifty Cent, Michael Jackson and Scriabin. Just that combination might have some entertainment value as humor, but such divergent styles would probably not lend themselves to crafting a great piece of music. So can you see how unbridled freedom gets in the way of making music?

Now here's a final thought. Most times when a kid comes here talking about freedom to follow their muse, that muse is actually quite small and limited. Their experience of music is generally rather narrow, maybe some Mozart, Beethoven, Bach and Chopin, plus whatever the flavor of the day in popular music is. So my advice is start listening outside your comfort zone. Listen to the composers who pushed the envelope in their day, Cesar Franck, Stravinsky, Debussy, Ravel, Randall Stroope, William Schuman, Elliot Carter, Xenakis and many more. Listen to the last two and you may be asking yourself "Is there such a thing as too much freedom??"

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#1151955 - 03/12/08 11:00 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Steve, don't forget John Cage. I predict that within 10 years not only will his music not be played, but he will become the poster child for wild, extravagant musical elitism that more or less ran its course by the end of the 1990s. Except for that I believe he will be quickly forgotten.
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#1151956 - 03/12/08 04:54 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Steve, don't forget John Cage. I predict that within 10 years not only will his music not be played, but he will become the poster child for wild, extravagant musical elitism that more or less ran its course by the end of the 1990s. Except for that I believe he will be quickly forgotten. [/b]
Oh I don't know. The prepared pianos pieces have an appeal to them. As for the real chance music I'd probably agree, but sometimes you see something like this and it's just an engaging experience. But there are no strong melodies to be heard in this segment.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=e8E_KbRsKrI

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#1151957 - 03/12/08 08:45 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I have no interest in continuing this exercise in Babel-like confusion, but I thought I'd point out that basis does in fact have a plural: "bases." Check a dictionary before you correct someone's spelling again, Steve. I thought you liked books that had rules in them?

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#1151958 - 03/12/08 11:07 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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A forum is a very harsh place to look for criticism, you cannot see the other's eye briefly close as he enjoy your music, you cannot see the smile on his face as he write his comment and search hard to find the little things that could guide you in improving yourself. Because if you ask for criticism, it's because you want to improve. right?

The best we can do to receive constructive criticism is to speak out what you seek for at the very beginning. But there is so much subtle thing in the way a piece is constructed that, even with the best attitude of all, a critic's commentary will necessary be a bit off track. It's up to the creator to pick what suits him, and what's not. If you cannot do that, don't seek out advice, you'll end up disappointed no matter what.

They say "what doesn't kill you makes you stronger", I believe it so much I made a movie about that (you can see it on my podcast if you understand french). Even some critics that I thought plain wrong helped me understand my own creation. If I ever post for criticism on this forum, feel free to tell what you really think without restrain .

Even if you can make objective statement about a piece, there is no such thing as objective appreciation in music as we do art and not engineering.

Note: I really liked the performance on Steve's video, does that make me an elitist? I've seen similar performances in music festivals and I must say I trully like the style.
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#1151959 - 03/14/08 04:27 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I think John Cage is amusing. I can see how it'd be fun to actually participate in one of his "compositions" but I find it difficult to take him seriously as a composer in the musical sense. He says in the beginning of the video: "I consider music to be the production of sound, and since I am producing sound, I would call it music" or something to that effect.

In my opinion, to say that music is simply "the production of sound" obscures the meaning of the word, music. Suddenly the word "music" becomes synonymous with: "Clapping," "Burping," "Talking," and any other word whose base meaning is the production of sound. Now how are we to describe the kind of sound made by humans, for humans, for its own sake?

So while I think John Cage is "fun" and certainly was an interesting person, I just can't place him in the same category as composers who write for actual musical instruments. I also can't quite understand why anyone would take recordings of his music seriously. I'd rather actually be amongst the performers, myself. It'd be like being in a playground, or something, making fun sounds. Maybe I'm just uneducated and not deep enough or something, I don't know. I'll let the resident pedants correct my erroneous thinking.

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#1151960 - 03/14/08 04:33 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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There aren't any boundaries, or rules. Do you suppose the people who wrote the books about 4 part harmony had any rule books to consult? It all stems from certain ideals. And it is only if the composer explicitly strives for those ideals that there is anything even approaching a "rule" for writing music. And it can be debated all day whether certain ideals (such as 4 part harmony) really do contribute to the musical effectiveness of a piece. If you're TRYING to sound exactly like Mozart then yeah...those rules would be helpful. But if you're just composing to write beautiful music---they're worth just about as much as toe clippings in the garbage can.[/b]
If you choose to ignore the boundaries and rules as they've been laid out in countless music theory books that's a choice you make. As someone who's composed classical and pop style music I would argue that it's foolish to ignore this information (BTW, go ahead and follow the links in my sig and listen to my music). The rules of voice leading have nothing to do with sounding like Mozart or Bach and have everything to do with composing music that's both effective and elegant. So Rule for breaking the music theory rules #1. If you don't want to sound elegant go ahead and break the rules. An example might be if you're composing a storm scene into a piece, lots of parallel fifths might be very effective in highlighting the drama of such a moment. However, you specifically mentioned composing beautiful music. Composers have been striving to write beauty into their music from the beginning of music. Music History tells us that humans have come to the conclusion that Parallel fifths are, in general, not beautiful, so they are to be avoided. Parallel octaves are a bit different, in composing vocal harmonies they are to be avoided because if they're not perfectly in tune they're ugly, but in instrumental music (where intonation is less of achallenge) it's viewed as one instrument doubling another to highlight a harmonic.

What's obvious to me is that you are interested in composing music, but have eschewed formal training because it might limit your freedom. Which brings me to point #2.
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I'm not sure if I agree with boundaries creating freedom. I think it is FUN sometimes to create boundaries for myself (that is, choosing to create rules for myself), but I generally find I am the most creative when I don't consider any rules at all. It is interesting to alternate between the two states of mind. But I would never want to remain squarely in the "rules" camp for long, I don't think. Especially because there are simply no objective bases for such rules. They are all nonsense---they are basically just games. "Let's see how many thirds and sixths we can shovel into an ABACA mould!" You know? I think it's silly personally. But fun with the right mindset. [/b]
What's obvious is that you haven't actually tried the rules camp. You're too busy trying to evaluate the "Objective basis" (note spelling correction) for the rules. It is your opinion that there is no objective basis for such rules, but 4+ centuries of music history would argue otherwise. And yet the presence of such rules has not in any way impeded the evolution of music. Numerous composers have developed their own individual methods for adhereing to and breaking "the Rulz." I'm willing to bet that in the vast majority of cases the process of learning to break "the Rulz" began with learning them.

As for the concept of freedom, think about it. A blank page and no Rulz is almost intimidating. The moment you write anything down you begin limiting your choices, whether by the key or style of music or whatever. The very act of notating music impacts your available choices for the music to follow. It's entirely possible to write a pastiche that includes snippets that sound like Bach, Mozart, Chopin, the Beatles, Disturbed, Fifty Cent, Michael Jackson and Scriabin. Just that combination might have some entertainment value as humor, but such divergent styles would probably not lend themselves to crafting a great piece of music. So can you see how unbridled freedom gets in the way of making music?

Now here's a final thought. Most times when a kid comes here talking about freedom to follow their muse, that muse is actually quite small and limited. Their experience of music is generally rather narrow, maybe some Mozart, Beethoven, Bach and Chopin, plus whatever the flavor of the day in popular music is. So my advice is start listening outside your comfort zone. Listen to the composers who pushed the envelope in their day, Cesar Franck, Stravinsky, Debussy, Ravel, Randall Stroope, William Schuman, Elliot Carter, Xenakis and many more. Listen to the last two and you may be asking yourself "Is there such a thing as too much freedom??" [/b]
I haven't eschewed formal training, I had 3 years of piano study with the top piano professor at my university. I wasn't an actual music student, but nonetheless I have had formal training at least in piano playing. While I haven't had a formal teacher in composition, I have read several music theory books (including Schoenberg's Theory of Harmony), websites, and have gathered information from the internet. That said though, I find what I've learned just on my own by ear, and from friends on the internet who also improvise to be far more useful with regards to making good music---that's been my individual experience anyway.

I have often toyed with improvising based on 4 part harmony and its rules such as parallel fifths, not doubling the leading tone, etc. I find it quite easy to do. That said, when I contrast pieces I've recorded where I've explicitly set out to follow the rules, or ignored them, not only can I not tell when I am or am not following the rules, I generally find that the rules have little or no impact on how elegant or beautiful the resulting sound is. Would you be able to spot doubling the leading tone or using parallel fifths just by ear? If so I find that very impressive, because I certainly can't (unless it is a passage of say, parallel open fifths and they are a defining feature of the piece).

Also, personally I find absolute total freedom completely unintimidating. Nor do I find rules intimidating...I just consider them an option.

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#1151961 - 03/16/08 04:06 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Zom, Steve:

Interesting posts. My contention is if you learn the rules and accepted conventions, you subconsciously tend to write in those ways, whether you realize it or not.

I believe there are advantages to learning and composing music in the conventional manner, but the also can be advantages in remaining unschooled, at least to an extent, and writing in an unconventional manner. I think there are advantages and disadvantages to both. Steve, you probably won't agree with this?

Zom: You say the rules have little or no impact on how elegant or beautiful the resulting sound is. I'm very interested in hearing opinions on this from those in the "conventional camp."

Zom, you also question whether leading tones and parallel fifths can be spotted by ear. Your questions parallels something I've been wondering about but didn't know how to express well. If the resulting music is elegant or beautiful or pleasing sounding, what's the difference if it has parallel fifths or ...whatever.

Well, I suppose the "difference" is, the music can be criticized for not adhering to the "rules". But the irony is everyone says the rules are made to be broken. \:D

If everyone agrees that the rules are made to be broken, and the rules are broken for a "purpose" and result in what many consider to be beautiful music, is that music "good"?

If on the other hand, the rules are broken due to ignorance of the rules and the result is what many consider to be beautiful music, is the music any less "good"?

If the music succeeds, does it make a difference if the person who broke the rules did so knowingly, or unknowingly due to lack of knowledge?

Does/should the answer to the above questions depend on whether the person breaking the rules is deemed to be worthy of breaking the rules? Or on the effect the music has?

Maybe the way to go (whether to learn all of the conventions or not) is best determined by which route results in the highest incidence of "successful" music: knowledge of and use of the conventional rules vs. the other route ???

We could ponder these questions forever, and in fact, we've been talking about this for a while here on this forum. Will we ever all come to an agreement on this subject? I don't think so!

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#1151962 - 03/16/08 06:17 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Let's not forget that "rules" of harmony, voice leading etc, are not instructions to be followed but descriptions of compositional practice of a certain era. Traditional 4-part harmony and its "rules" will end up with you producing (if you're skilful) something that could perhaps have been a Bach chorale harmonisation (maybe on one of his off days \:\) ). This is hardly the standard harmonic vocabulary of 20th, 21st century music. (And not of most 19th century music while we're at it). And of course, even Bach broke these "rules" that have been distilled from his writing of chorales. (eg leading note should proceed to tonic - take any Bach chorale at random and you've got a pretty good chance of finding this "rule" broken in the alto part at the final cadence).

We learn these things in order to understand ways in which music works, and to learn a certain facility in writing. If you think that instruction in composition is purely learning and abiding by rules, then you have the wrong idea.

I also have to disagree that learning rules and conventions means you necessarily (even if unconsciously) write in this way, and the best way to avoid this is to remain "unschooled". I can't see why knowledge is something to be feared. Should novelists avoid reading and examining the works of Jane Austen lest they be unable to then produce anything but a pale imitation of Pride and Prejudice? Why should skill be a threat to spontaneity? I just don't follow the argument.

Jeanne, you also seem to be assuming that those who are not schooled in the conventions are the only ones who write "unconventional" music. This is just obviously not true.
You may not want to study harmony and counterpoint. Your choice. But don't think that by so doing you are necessarily bestowing on yourself any advantage.

And my thoughts on the original question? I have benefited from criticism of my work on many occasions. If I didn't want to hear any negative feedback, then I think I wouldn't ask for feedback at all.
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#1151963 - 03/16/08 01:17 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Let's not forget that "rules" of harmony, voice leading etc, are not instructions to be followed but descriptions of compositional practice of a certain era. ...
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Yes, but from the sounds of it, many consider these kinds of things rules, and base critiques upon them, use them as grounds to blast other composer's work.


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We learn these things in order to understand ways in which music works, and to learn a certain facility in writing. If you think that instruction in composition is purely learning and abiding by rules, then you have the wrong idea.
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Very well said. No, I don't think instruction in composition necessarily is purely learning and abiding by the rules, but some here have posted they've encountered this in the learning institution they are attending. If I recall correctly, even after demonstrating to their teacher they understood and were capable of executing compositions in the conventional way, but had purposefully deviated from the wanted method to achieve a certain purpose, they were given a bad grade and disciplined.

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I also have to disagree that learning rules and conventions means you necessarily (even if unconsciously) write in this way, and the best way to avoid this is to remain "unschooled". I can't see why knowledge is something to be feared. Should novelists avoid reading and examining the works of Jane Austen lest they be unable to then produce anything but a pale imitation of Pride and Prejudice? Why should skill be a threat to spontaneity? I just don't follow the argument. [/b]
I don't think knowledge is to be feared, but it certainly has an effect. I do believe everything we encounter and especially things we take time to learn about, continues to knock about in our subconscious and may therefore manifest itself, whether we realize it or not. Is that necessarily true for every person. Maybe not. But it's likely that it will.

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Jeanne, you also seem to be assuming that those who are not schooled in the conventions are the only ones who write "unconventional" music. This is just obviously not true.
You may not want to study harmony and counterpoint. Your choice. But don't think that by so doing you are necessarily bestowing on yourself any advantage.

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Oh, no! I certainly don't believe that only those who are not schooled in the conventions are the only ones who write unconventional music!

What I'm trying to say...

I believe, generally speaking, for most people, learning the conventional methods is the best route to take; however, I also believe...

in some instances, for certain people, there may be a greater advantage in not learning the conventions. It may be more advantageous for these types to stay unschooled. It allows them the freedom to think musically in original, unconventional ways that would otherwise have been "stamped out of them" by their education. These people are probably rare cases, but they do exist. (I'm not saying I'm one of them.)

And for some people, it means the difference between making any music at all. (Those who couldn't abide by the conventions, got the life stamped out of them, and gave up altogether.)

I am reminded of Robert Frost's poem "The Road Less Travelled." The problem with what I'm talking about, is a person can only take one road, not two.

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#1151964 - 03/16/08 04:32 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by Jeanne W:
I do believe everything we encounter and especially things we take time to learn about, continues to knock about in our subconscious and may therefore manifest itself, whether we realize it or not. Is that necessarily true for every person. Maybe not. But it's likely that it will.[/b]

I hear what you're saying. In fact, it's obvious. Our learning will manifest itself - I mean that's why we do it. But I think this happens purely by listening too, doesn't it? And no-one is suggesting we avoid that. I just don't think that knowing how something works is likely to taint your creativity. In my composition course (many moons ago) we had to churn out lots of music in lots of different styles. I was particularly good at the mock Schubert song, no doubt because I knew so many of them. But do I write in the style of Schubert? Am I tempted to? Well, no. But certain things I will gladly take from Schubert - the interplay of vocal line and accompaniment, the emotional power of the melodic line - if this is influence, then I'm influenced. But of course my music doesn't sound like Schubert. \:\)

I believe, generally speaking, for most people, learning the conventional methods is the best route to take; however, I also believe...
in some instances, for certain people, there may be a greater advantage in not learning the conventions. It may be more advantageous for these types to stay unschooled. It allows them the freedom to think musically in original, unconventional ways that would otherwise have been "stamped out of them" by their education. These people are probably rare cases, but they do exist. (I'm not saying I'm one of them.)[/b]

Just to reiterate - I don't see harmony & counterpoint as "methods", and certainly not "methods for composition".

I am in total agreement with your opinion of courses which stamp out creativity and individuality in the name of teaching "rules" of composition. Surely they distinguish between what is a harmony exercise and what is a compositional project??? If not, then I'm just as opposed as you. Music courses which "stamp out" anything sound particularly nasty to me! We probably agree much more than we seem to \:\)
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#1151965 - 03/16/08 06:13 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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#1151966 - 03/16/08 07:24 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Don't be so obsessed with originality. Quality comes first. Originality will follow - as long as it's not forced. [/b]
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#1151967 - 03/17/08 04:57 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I've tried to stay out of this, but I think it's time to add to the fun...

We study composition for the same reason we study grammar -- so we know the formal aspects of writing, whether it be music or the written word. That are times that we break the rules -- but we need to know that we are breaking the rules and why.

The fact that I've studied grammar does not constrain my writing but, rather, ensures that what I write will have the possibility of being understood by those who read what I've written. The masters of writing knew the rules and therefore could decide if they were going to break those rules and when and how it would be done -- usually for a specific effect.

Music is no different. There is a grammar to music, a structure and a form. There was a time when the "rules" said you did not use a tritone (diminished fifth/augmented fourth). There was a reason behind it that had to do with the fact that the ratio of the jump was an irrational number. However, there's a more powerful argument against it: it's hard to sing! Yet in the song "Maria" from "West Side Story" we see a use if that very tritone.

If we don't know the rules then we don't know when we are breaking them. If we don't know that, then the result we produce may not be what we expected, at least, not in the ear of the listener. Now, if we don't care about those who will hear what we write, then it doesn't matter. If, on the other hand, we want other people to hear our music, to understand what we are trying to say, then it makes sense that we understand the rules that have formed our music for at least the last 700 years.

On another forum someone asked if anyone knew how to write a fugue. The poster had never studied composition, but wanted to write a fugue. How is it possible to write a particular form that requires a knowledge of counterpoint without having studied counterpoint? How is it possible to write a particular form if one has never studied what that form is and how it is constructed?

Even "new" music that has not prior form is dependent upon the ear to follow the music and to have expectations met and surprises generated. These are dependent upon knowledge of what it means to meet musical expectations and to surprise one musically. And that requires study and knowledge.

Knowledge does not bind one but, rather expands possibilities by providing a basis upon which one builds and shows horizons that are yet to be explored.

Just my $0.02 worth...

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#1151968 - 03/17/08 06:49 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Damn!

I missed this thread! I hate being away for too long! \:\(

Zom (original poster):

There are some things to conisder.

first of all there is constructive critisism and feedback which should always exist and be asked for. I'm 30 and I still ask for help. Nothing wrong with that!

Anybody aiming to hurt someone through critisism is an idiot! Plain fact! Forget about that, since it's not worth the trouble or worrying really! Negative is not bad per se, and if a track/music is rubbish, then it is rubbish, I'm sorry to say! There are far better words to describe that and there are ways to explain what you mean and why you think it's rubbish, but if it is, it is. Far more important to consider is that exactly because it's not exactly objective, it's a personal opinion that matters. If you value the person giving you the critisism, then count it in, if not, then don't care too much, unless it makes sense as well.

As for composition and rules. Since I'm finishing my PhD in composition, I can have my say to it, without believing it's definately right, but still worthy a read (so in other words: my $0.02)

Yes, composition doesn't have rules, etc, blah blah. Sissy talk! Composition is not placing a chimp on the piano and recording him. Composition is not going random (unless you have a strong philosophical case on your back, like Cage, or Ives had). Composition is not not caring (twice the not).

Yes there are no rules, BUT:

i. There are objective rules: Flute can't go bellow B. Want it lower? get an alto one, or have the clarinet play it. A single violin playing pizzicati, won't be heard through the timpani, and brass and bass drum playing FF. These are facts, rules if you want. So orchestration and instrumentation is filled with rules.
ii. composition: Intervals. A minor second sounds "ugly". Sounds dissonant. In most cases (depends on the environment always, but generic fact still remains). A minor third sounds pretty nice. A minor chord sounds nice, a cluster sounds... weird. Not using a motif, or knowing you have a motif, can hurt the development. Putting 4 melodies in the row is not 1 finished piece. It's 4 pieces jigsawed together. What the old (and new) masters did is art and technique. It's not inspiration. Take Beethoven for example. A lot of his themes are mere arpegios. Appasionata, Moonlight, and many other actually. And with a single F minor arpeggio (appassionata) he ends up with a whole sonate of 10-15 minutes of length! He didn't follow any textbook rules, but he certainly applied knowledge, his mind, and various techniques (counterpoint, harmony, etc) in his composition. Plus a set form: Sonata form.

If you take notice in universities, I doubt you'll find anyone teaching "composition". In my masters I was taught "compositional techniques of the 20th century", "aesthetics in the 20th century" and antoher 2 modules a bit more irrelavent. Nobody came to tell me about things that I could argue about: The theme, why I went of B minor (which I never did, I'm atonal to my academic persuits), or other things. But they did have things to propose (maybe this is a bit too long, maybe the piano won't sound too much through this dense texture, etc). And nobody actually taught me that "you compose this way". Nope! They all taught me that "one thing you could do is this technique, like Ligeti, or that one like Stravinsky", etc...

Anyways I'll come back later to watch this thread. \:\) mighty interesting!
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#1151969 - 03/17/08 09:15 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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All I know is, in my own experience---the quality of my music has been continually improving since I began writing music, and the more I ignore the rules the better my music becomes. Maybe my ear is discovering the rules on their own if they really are there, a couple of people have told me I use them even though I didn't plan to. I do like tonal sounds a lot, and they find their way into my music. I just happen to use my ear to create these sounds rather than books, rules, and others pointing out errors. I've never needed to know why I was or was not breaking any rules. All I know is---by continually improving my musical vocabulary, my music has gotten more expressive, more elegant, introduced more form, etc. without consulting a single music theory book. I would never say that is how everyone should approach writing music though! It's just how I do it...

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#1151970 - 03/17/08 09:26 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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What rules are you refering to? Otherwise we won't be able to communicate properly.

When I compose I don't have any textbooks next to me, or some handy "rules" to follow. I compose what "I want to compose". THE END...

But I can explain pretty much everything I do and why I did it, as well as make my music sound coherent (if I'm successful to what I do, which is another issue altogether and can't answer that myself for myself by myself... to autistic to do so... ;\) )

Rules in harmony, counterpoint, fugue, etc are there ONLY for stylistic reasons. There's no reason why you can't have the piece only with parrallel 5ths! Or clashes, or everything. But if you want to resemble that classical style, or Baroque, then yes you do need to know what they did in order to follow. If you just want to write music, you're free to do so! Heck, either way you're free to do so.

Just make sure that you ignore rules, because you choose so and you know that the result will be "better" (according to you of course) and not because of ignorance of the rules alltogether. \:\)
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#1151971 - 03/18/08 10:44 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Rules about parallel fifths and octaves, doubling the leading tone, etc. The common practice era rules.

I use them when I imitate baroque and classical music, but when I'm just playing to be myself, I don't pay attention to whether or not I am using them. Funny thing is, some people have told me I use them anyway, so I guess my ear just likes those sounds. Books or no books.

Let's not get off track though. I think my main concern is I've become aware of way too many people in the classical music world who have absolutely towering inferiority complexes...and I think this is sad. Music should be about joy, not an endless cycle of teachers taking out vengeance on their students for their own crushed creative spirits (which appears to be what is happening). I've been fortunate enough for this not to happen to me, and this is partly why I crusade so against negative criticism. I see it as a threat to simple childlike joy with music. I enjoy this kind of joy and freedom and I always wish others to also.I know many others share this joy but it just breaks my heart when I hear about someone who thinks they can't do it and insists they suck and so on and so forth just because some bully said their music sucked.

And it makes me mad when people say nonsense like WELL YOU JUST HAVE TO HAVE BALLS IN THE CRUEL MUSIC WORLD. BUT I WILL BE NICE AND GENTLE AND NOT RIP YOU APART AS BADLY AS *I* WAS.

you know? It just makes me mad. Music should be about joy not freakin' 19th century boarding school discipline nonsense. Why haven't we moved beyond that? And I'm not saying anyone on this site is necessarily all THAT bad, I'm just trying to draw attention to the issue of: Music should be about joy, encouragement, etc. You know? This is music.. MUSIC people. Not the freakin' ARMY.

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#1151972 - 03/18/08 10:49 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Nikolas, Ed, Scott and Currawong,

I appreciate your comments. I have refrained from commenting in this thread because it became personal. I offered an analysis of a portion of a piece that I hoped would serve to highlight it's organizational strengths. I received no commentary on that effort, but rather was taken to task for grammer. I find it ironic that I would be criticised for not knowing grammer by someone who eschews the knowledge of musical grammer. If music is organized sound then having an organizational plan would seem a wise course of action.

Again thanks for your comments.

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#1151973 - 03/18/08 10:51 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Grammar =)

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#1151974 - 03/18/08 10:53 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I didn't criticize your grammar, I criticized your spelling (which by the way you did first tee hee). Anyway...music doesn't communicate semantic meaning, therefore there can't be anything truly "correct" in music. Even in language it can't be said to be truly "incorrect" unless the meaning is so obscured you can't decipher it.

Look, I don't dislike you Steve. I just think you should be a little bit more sensitive about what you say to people about what they innocently create from their hearts, that's all. You're actually not the worst I've seen out there...still though I am just trying to bring awareness to the idea that music should be about joy and encouragement, not negativity, criticism and "balls and cruelty" and what not, that you and so many others think it's about.

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#1151975 - 03/18/08 11:04 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Steve, no worries man \:\)

Zom, I find that you live in some kind of bubble! Not in exactly the negative way, but the kind that makes you believe that what happened to you is the norm in the world. It's not. I'm teaching and know many teachers, at university level, postgraduate level, or lower level, at grade level, piano and composition, none of who are eveilshly hating thier students and want to make them suffer, etc. You remind me a bit of Pink Floyd, only it's no longer 1981!

Rules etc: They are only impotant when you attempt to go towards the stylistic way and the aesthetic way of a said era. If you want to write like Bach, for example, you should know counterpoint otherwise your efforts will show transparent, I'm sorry to say. You are certainly free to do whatever you want (but yell at me, which is not nice at all), and not take it out at random people! I have tons of parrellel 5ths and doublings and triplings and whatever in my pieces ,and nobody can say anything to me. It's stylisticly different. ;\)

Plus you should know that since you post in the Internet, everything goes public and you are in the fear of being critisized by anyone! What if someone listens to your music and thinks it's rubbish? You can either hide your music for ever, or bear to have it torn apart. A risk you need to take, only if you mean it.

Same with posting, you came, you posted, the composition forum rarely reaches 2nd page and you made it! You are being critisised for what you say and you are being asked to reconsider by more than one person. Maybe you should check if, just if, what you say is not the norm. And either way, found a bad teacher? Report him/her and move on! I never stayed in one place until I was happy and stayed for 10 years in a row! Easy...
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#1151976 - 03/18/08 11:07 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I don't care if my music is criticized. This isn't about me, this is about people who are vulnerable. I have a thick hide from another pursuit other than music. I just don't want other people to have that happen to them in music. In music I'm like a 5 year old boy in a playground. I want others to enjoy that also. So when I see any remote likelihood of that being stamped out of someone, I often snap. Partially because of that possibility, and also because I find individuals who post everywhere on forums lording their SUPREME KNOWLEDGE in everyone's face to be kind of repulsive. Unless they do it in a kind, unconfrontational manner...I've known a few individuals like that. Who are only helpful, and encouraging.

I think also at issue here is trust. I think maybe criticism is much more palatable if you trust your teacher. On the internet, trust can never be an issue because you can never interact with or form any sort of (real) bond with them. It is much more volatile than in person. I think on the internet people ought to reserve such comments and only provide helpful information, not criticism. Yes, I know I am criticizing a criticizer, but sometimes you have to fight fire with fire.

Maybe I do live in a bubble. You're probably right. I HAVE known a sizable number of people with huge inferiority complexes who were classical musicians though. Maybe it was bad parenting (of those people. my parents were awesome). Maybe it was a bad teacher, I don't know. But something has gone wrong in the classical music world. The manager of a local piano shop even said people couldn't WAIT to get more guitar lessons, but the piano students couldn't WAIT for christmas vacation.

Something's wrong in the classical music world---maybe I misidentified the problem as criticism...

What do you think it is?

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#1151977 - 03/18/08 11:32 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I've been reading this thread with interest. The first thing is that we are an eclectic bunch of a variety that would probably not meet in real life. An amateur who has recently discovered the piano and is trying his hand at inspiration and throw in a couple of chords will not usually meet up with an ultra-trained musician or even teacher of ultra-trained musicians. A composer will not find himself critiqued by a student who has just enough knowledge to feel he knows it all, but not enough to know he has barely scratched the surface. Some go at it with passion and timidity, wanting acceptance and praise for their works without having a clue what critiquing might mean. Some give criticism which boosts their own egos and that criticism may be false. We don't know each other and we don't know each other's background.

What I would be afraid of is that if I present myself as an amateur and offer up something, the possibility that I have a fragile ego and the experience on boards such as this might stop someone who knows something from giving me advice that would further my growth. The obvious solution is to write "criticism is welcome and solicited." and then hope the criticizer knows what he is talking about.

People critiquing may not realize that information riding beneath their ideas is not to be taken for granted, and they may have absorbed some fundamental things so long ago that it is no longer on the surface of their knowledge. If somebody says "You should change this to that.", if it seems that this person is acting out of some knowledge, I would be inclined to ask for further explanation and possibly what the principles behind the suggestion might be. That's the moment where I may have the opportunity to grow beyond the present confines of my knowledge and expectations. There is a big caveat that this person may not know what he is talking about. This is the Internet.

I think the diversity inherent in forums such as this one presents a special challenge that we all have to be sensitive to or at least aware of. When people share a common experience, such as jazz musicians (and their audience perhaps) among each other, or conservatory students with their teachers, or the amateurs who are in it for the fun of it, each set has an unspoken and unthought of sets of behaviours and expectations. There is a communication that happens beyond words in the interchange. The mix and match of this can engender misunderstanding and create a lot of unnecessary negativity.

Zom, having written all that, I think that I have encountered some of what you have written about, and have some mixed feelings in regards to some of it.

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#1151978 - 03/18/08 11:53 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Oh there is something wrong with the classical world Zom, I agree! And I've mentioned it in other threads as well. But your phrasing was something less of almost off topic to what you are saying now and how you started the thread!
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#1151979 - 03/18/08 12:14 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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 Quote:
Originally posted by keystring:
I've been reading this thread with interest. The first thing is that we are an eclectic bunch of a variety that would probably not meet in real life. An amateur who has recently discovered the piano and is trying his hand at inspiration and throw in a couple of chords will not usually meet up with an ultra-trained musician or even teacher of ultra-trained musicians. A composer will not find himself critiqued by a student who has just enough knowledge to feel he knows it all, but not enough to know he has barely scratched the surface. Some go at it with passion and timidity, wanting acceptance and praise for their works without having a clue what critiquing might mean. Some give criticism which boosts their own egos and that criticism may be false. We don't know each other and we don't know each other's background.

What I would be afraid of is that if I present myself as an amateur and offer up something, the possibility that I have a fragile ego and the experience on boards such as this might stop someone who knows something from giving me advice that would further my growth. The obvious solution is to write "criticism is welcome and solicited." and then hope the criticizer knows what he is talking about.

People critiquing may not realize that information riding beneath their ideas is not to be taken for granted, and they may have absorbed some fundamental things so long ago that it is no longer on the surface of their knowledge. If somebody says "You should change this to that.", if it seems that this person is acting out of some knowledge, I would be inclined to ask for further explanation and possibly what the principles behind the suggestion might be. That's the moment where I may have the opportunity to grow beyond the present confines of my knowledge and expectations. There is a big caveat that this person may not know what he is talking about. This is the Internet.

I think the diversity inherent in forums such as this one presents a special challenge that we all have to be sensitive to or at least aware of. When people share a common experience, such as jazz musicians (and their audience perhaps) among each other, or conservatory students with their teachers, or the amateurs who are in it for the fun of it, each set has an unspoken and unthought of sets of behaviours and expectations. There is a communication that happens beyond words in the interchange. The mix and match of this can engender misunderstanding and create a lot of unnecessary negativity.

Zom, having written all that, I think that I have encountered some of what you have written about, and have some mixed feelings in regards to some of it. [/b]
Excellent post, I think you underlined many of the most important issues here and described them better than I could I think.

Steve---allow me to apologize for blowing the original situation with pukino out of proportion. I made it into a situation by taking my personal crusade out in that thread...sorry for that. I was being childish. That said however, I think I've succeeded in drawing this to the attention of people who have viewed this thread. I think it is always important to carefully consider what one says and in what context and where. The creative spirit of the young is one of humanity's greatest treasures--and I suppose sometimes I tend to get a little uppity defending it (even when I've misidentified a situation)

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#1151980 - 03/19/08 10:10 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by Zom:

Steve---allow me to apologize for blowing the original situation with pukino out of proportion. I made it into a situation by taking my personal crusade out in that thread...sorry for that. I was being childish.[/b]
Accepted

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#1151981 - 05/19/08 11:53 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I just got into a discussion with my mother about music theory, a subject I know very little about. (I know the basics, cadences, chords, some techniques) and she summurized it up by saying something like this,

"Theory isn't a set of rules, It's a tool you use when needed to help develope a better understanding of your musical world, never take what people say to literally because they are just words, and can't convey the meaning of such things as music."

She then went on a rant about how things sound differently for everyone, like chord inversions, she was like a person might find a root position sounding more assertive, or more colorful depending on the individual, and that books that teach this stuff, are biased towards there listening expierance.

She went on for hours dude. I asked her like 1 question about minor scales.

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#1151982 - 05/21/08 11:28 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I feel if your playing for your own enjoyment, you can do whatever you want.
But if you want to make it as a writer/composer/musician it's very important to listen to criticism/comments.
I've worked with musicians and been in bands over the years and have found that most people will say to musicians that they play very well and sounded great, when in fact if they had a CD of them they would never listen to it.
If you want to make it your music has to be something people want to listen to.
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#1151983 - 07/29/08 08:49 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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I am always blunt and straight down the middle although I must admit I perhaps expect too much from everybody.

I do try to be detailed but every composer knows that it's just another guy's opinion. How you value it or learn from it (or not) is another matter.

If someone openly asks for feedback, I will answer honestly and candidly. If someone can't take another composers candid reply, then did they really want feedback at all or just recognition? And there in lies the irony. Most composers just want to be appreciated. The internet is a good way to get your music circulated but you have to be honest with yourself first and foremost.... do you genuinely want feedback (of any type... we're not robots, some will express more heavily than others!!) or do you want your music to be downloaded so that it can be appreciated?

The reality of it is this: The music business is hard. Harder than most realise. Being a composer is even tougher. Develop a thick skin, have passion for your craft and BE UNIQUE!!
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#1151984 - 07/29/08 08:50 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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#1151985 - 07/29/08 11:20 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Zom - you know what happens to people who hear nothing but "good/positive" feedback?

Click here to find out....

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#1151986 - 07/30/08 10:14 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by gemiknight:
Zom - you know what happens to people who hear nothing but "good/positive" feedback?

Click here to find out.... [/b]
While I get the humor of this I'm unconvinced it's helpful. Far more helpful would be the Last Lecture of Randy Pausch. Here's a link.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ji5_MqicxSo

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#1151987 - 07/30/08 11:34 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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While I get the humor of this I'm unconvinced it's helpful. Far more helpful would be the Last Lecture of Randy Pausch. Here's a link.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ji5_MqicxSo [/QB]
Ah! Randy Pausch! Great inspiration! Sad to hear of his recent death... But good point, Steve

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#1151988 - 07/30/08 07:53 PM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Okay, Zom, watch the video link above starting at about 9:40 into it...

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#1151989 - 07/31/08 09:18 AM Re: Criticism of compositions
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Originally posted by gemiknight:
Okay, Zom, watch the video link above starting at about 9:40 into it... [/b]
There's another gem at an hour and 13 minutes in, allow me to quote;

"Get a feedback loop and listen to it. Your feedback loop can be this dorky spreadsheet thing I did or it can be just one great man telling you what you need to hear. The hard part is the listening to it. Anybody can get chewed out, all right. It's the rare person who says "Oh my God you're right" as opposed to "No wait! The real reason is...." We've all heard that. When people give you feedback cherish it and use it."

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