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Now on your piece.
On first view I felt quite weird... "Bah... the guy just put a few 1/2nds chords in a line and thinks he composes". But I did try it on the keyboard after the initial 1 sec viewing and was pleasently surprised!
The hamronic progression is quite nice, although it won't win any metals on originality (why should one chasse such a metal anyway?), and in the piano it simply works, no matter how empty it may seem.
My gut told me, while playing it, that this is an intro to something else, an overtoure maybe, the 1st prelude of the other 23 to come. Right now it doesn't feel strong enough to stand on it's own, it feels incomplete. At the same time I don't think that you should extend it, other than close it, and not make it 2 pages even.
It serves a great purpose as a... promenade, maybe (like Mussorgsky had in the "pictures of an exhibition") or a choral opening to another more... melodic, more alive, more moving part.
So, in all. Great start! Needs development, but not necessarily on the same piece, but maybe a different, like making a set perhaps.
Hope it helps.