Hello,

here I show my short piano composition - I just start work on it, so I will continue this slowly. Now I would like to ask your opinion about this piece. Thanks for comments :-)

Sincerely,
Sedonepix

http://www.badongo.com/audio/12919753

ps: English is not my original language, sorry for possible mistakes.

I really really like the beginning, I was quite surprised with how much you could do with the octaves in the LH. Halfway through when it changes, I didn't care as much for the octaves staying in one place. ?? But maybe you could still use the RH melody, just move the LH around a bit so it doesn't sit on one octave quite as long at a stretch? Again, I really like the start of this!!!!!!!

Thank you for your comment, musiccr8r.
I will try to improve my LH.

And I will continue soon :-).

http://www.badongo.com/audio/13064955

the complete (?) "Silveria".

please, comment - it is very interesting for me to know what do you think about it.

thank you for hearing.

Very nice! I like the composition and the playing is excellent.

thank you, Joe!
for me it is very nice to hear it.

sedonepix.

I second musiccr8r. My favourite moment, actually, is 0:17-0:22. It's the way you played those repeated As that caught my attention. Good job

sedonepix,

Just beautiful.

I just can't stand rich, big, but boring pieces (I have to say this). You can find tons of them.

This piece, though, is full of emotions, little story I wanna hear. Instead of closing the window after 20 sec. I just want more and more... You have to finish it and make it longer soon (did I say please? !

TTYS,
Miljan

Hi all!

This my post is not about "Silveria", wich is still under work btw, but about my new composition "The wind in Utrecht": http://www.box.net/shared/3qz1drleyl (this is my black and white impression about visiting Utrecht). Thanks in advance.

sedonepix

Hello.

Here is my new compositions.

"The grand in the rain" (or original name in my language is "Remembrance of what never happened" - hope, I do write it correct): http://www.box.net/shared/fmthfi5l3q

and

"Romance No.11": http://www.box.net/shared/xc6lnkll8y


Thanks for hearing.

Yeah! definitely well composed. Very inspiring!

Hi all!
"The one story": http://www.box.net/shared/jm4ut5ouqs

thanks for comments, if you will like to give some.