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#1285957 - 10/13/09 08:30 AM
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Hi, I'm working for some time on a Sonata now, which is amazingly difficult, especially when your role model is Beethoven. This is a scherzo I have written (by the basic meaning of the word, a funny piece, but not by the basic rules), and I was just wondering if some of you would like to try it out, maybe record it? Thank you very much and enjoy! (recommended tempo is 120bpm) page1: http://www.box.net/shared/1kr6h5tserpage2: http://www.box.net/shared/i7465y8049page3: http://www.box.net/shared/k38hk7d30c
Edited by vvanrij (10/13/09 08:34 AM)
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#1286138 - 10/13/09 12:47 PM
Re: Please try out this piece
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Here is a sample of the program Sibelius playing it http://www.box.net/shared/ofjufjgelj
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#1286170 - 10/13/09 01:30 PM
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[Re: Victor25]
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That's really cool, I like it. I don't know to what extent it is original but to my taste and within my amateur knowledge of composition, this is very good.
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#1286261 - 10/13/09 03:45 PM
Re: Please try out this piece
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Thank you very much. I sure hope its original!
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#1287012 - 10/14/09 05:00 PM
Re: Please try out this piece
[Re: Victor25]
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Anymore listeners, players?
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#1302135 - 11/09/09 01:23 PM
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Thank you all so much!
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#1306943 - 11/16/09 11:52 PM
Re: Please try out this piece
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hahaha, nice composition you got there. Rather than Beethoven, I'd say it's more of a Mozart/Haydn-sounding composition... but then it's not, as it's yours. Really, I really enjoy this and can't wait to try it out, after I've finished my other pieces though. It's fun-sounding.
Edit: After hearing it a second time, I find the ending too abrupt. Just my opinion, but how about adding a half-noted C chord (root, thrid, fifth) on the 3rd beat of the 85th measure (treble side), and for the bass side, a single middle C.
I'd like to hear your opinion on that.
Edited by Inan (11/17/09 12:10 AM)
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