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#1325358 - 12/14/09 04:57 PM Work in progress - A minimal piano piece.
Cherubin Offline
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Registered: 12/14/09
Posts: 2
Hi there,

I am here in order to get some feedback and critics concerning a little piece of music i'm writing at the moment.
First of all i want to say that i am sorry about the poor quality of the recording and the numerous mistakes it includes but the piano is a little detuned and my technical level is what it is (plus the fact that i hate recording myself).
I am also reworking on the second part of the piece because i find that the left hand sounds too mechanical here, and i'd like to extend a little bit the third part of it.

Anyway there it is : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tNey4v1qyIM

Hope you'll still enjoy it.
Sorry for my english too, but it is not my native language ^^
Thanks forward for the critics smile

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#1327375 - 12/17/09 10:30 AM Re: Work in progress - A minimal piano piece. [Re: Cherubin]
Chris G Offline
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Registered: 01/15/09
Posts: 737
Loc: Portland, Oregon
Since no-one else has reviewed this I'll take a shot. The interplay between left and right hand is really nice and creates a great texture. Maybe it was the recording but the melody seemed to get lost in the mix, I would have liked it to stand out more. Apart from that I liked the piece.

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