Thank you! That is what I was hoping for, someone that has a better understanding of music to tell me what is missing
Like I said I do not have a teacher, so I come here to get some advice
I know my playing is not perfect, however I do not always know what is wrong and what needs fixing
At first I tried to play the forte part louder, but somehow it did not sound that good. I guess I just didn't play it that well
I will work on that, to make it more distinctive. And when it comes to the silences, now that I listen to me playing I see it. Thank you again, I shall work on it and will come back here with my next video
Edit: I have just watched the video again and I see what you mean about piano and forte not being piano and forte. I do play it softer for piano and louder for forte. I was trying to record audio and video separately and I forgot I had microphone boost enabled in windows so I had to record very silently. So I didn't really hear very well what I was playing, was just going by feeling