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#1684611 - 05/25/11 09:13 PM My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback )
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They want a piece under 1 minute from each pupil of our composition class. Winner will take %60 scholarship for conservatoire i need your feedbacks about my composition. I can edit the composition until tomorrow morning. Feel free to criticize.

You can download from here

https://rapidshare.com/files/1015672560/Composition_in_E.wav


Edited by Batuhan (05/25/11 09:18 PM)
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#1684613 - 05/25/11 09:15 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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I don't want to login or sign up to box.net. Isn't there another way to get the file(s)?
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#1684614 - 05/25/11 09:15 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
I don't want to login or sign up to box.net. Isn't there another way to get the file(s)?


Cant you download without membership ? Wait im uploading another site.
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#1684616 - 05/25/11 09:17 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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Ok! since I'm still awake (04:16 in Greece), I'll wait around a little more for you! wink A scholarsip IS worth it! smile
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#1684617 - 05/25/11 09:18 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
Ok! since I'm still awake (04:16 in Greece), I'll wait around a little more for you! wink A scholarsip IS worth it! smile


https://rapidshare.com/files/1015672560/Composition_in_E.wav

Thank you i have another composition too in B-flat i dont know which one i have to choose the other one is not completed but i can upload it.


Edited by Batuhan (05/25/11 09:28 PM)
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#1684619 - 05/25/11 09:22 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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Do upload it then... but make it into an mp3, because WAVs are waaaay larger and take up time uploading and downloading. wink
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#1684620 - 05/25/11 09:27 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
Do upload it then... but make it into an mp3, because WAVs are waaaay larger and take up time uploading and downloading. wink


Here's the B-flat one, i can complete until tomorrow without sleep but i dont know which one i have to choose frown

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=QCWHSRG4



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#1684624 - 05/25/11 09:32 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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The E 'prelude' is a very nice and clean sounding work. It's small so there's not much to tell. Perhaps you could 'inflitrate' a couple of 'foreign' notes in the left hand (apart from the chord and the passing notes) to spice it up a bit, but it's not necessary. But it is very nice. I have it on loop and it's beautiful and beautifully played! Well done!

The Bb nocturne is based on the same form and character of the previous one I think, but I'd reckon is more dangerous since it's VERY close to the Chopin nocturnes and style, while the other seems cleaner. Plus it's not ready!

Just keep in mind that I actually believe that they are expecting a score. I know that I would. We're talking about composition, so they might expect a printed piece of paper (or manuscript).


Edited by Nikolas (05/25/11 09:33 PM)
Edit Reason: changed Ab to Bb
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#1684633 - 05/25/11 09:43 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
The E 'prelude' is a very nice and clean sounding work. It's small so there's not much to tell. Perhaps you could 'inflitrate' a couple of 'foreign' notes in the left hand (apart from the chord and the passing notes) to spice it up a bit, but it's not necessary. But it is very nice. I have it on loop and it's beautiful and beautifully played! Well done!

The Bb nocturne is based on the same form and character of the previous one I think, but I'd reckon is more dangerous since it's VERY close to the Chopin nocturnes and style, while the other seems cleaner. Plus it's not ready!

Just keep in mind that I actually believe that they are expecting a score. I know that I would. We're talking about composition, so they might expect a printed piece of paper (or manuscript).


Yeah second one is very dangerous i inspired from the Chopin's berceuse and mixed it with the style of Nocturne. Anyway i have to choose the E major one ? Yes there is 2 foreign note at the beginning i recognized it too. But didnt change it i will look. Yeah they want the score too but i wont write it down until be sure from the piece.
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#1684635 - 05/25/11 09:47 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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I would go with the E major one. Also I said add MORE notes which stand out of the chord.

And do make the score now. You will be able to see stuff and compare them with other scores you have, thus having a different opinion about it yourself. The eye works in different ways than the ear. wink
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#1684639 - 05/25/11 09:54 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
I would go with the E major one. Also I said add MORE notes which stand out of the chord.

And do make the score now. You will be able to see stuff and compare them with other scores you have, thus having a different opinion about it yourself. The eye works in different ways than the ear. wink


Ok im writing down now. Yeah i have to add more notes to the left hand apart from chord notes. I think the E major one is better from the other one for competition too. Thanks for your comments its really helps me a lot.
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#1684640 - 05/25/11 09:55 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Batuhan]
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What time do you have to deliver the score? I have to go to bed at some point, but I'll probably be up at around 07:00 Greek time, so I can have a look at the score if you want (just save it to PDF, instead of Finale or Sibelius format, so that other people can see it).

Also do see if other people chime in. I mean I'm one person, so I might have an opinion and others might have other opinions.
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#1684644 - 05/25/11 10:02 PM Re: My Composition in E For Competition ( Need Feedback ) [Re: Nikolas]
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Originally Posted By: Nikolas
What time do you have to deliver the score? I have to go to bed at some point, but I'll probably be up at around 07:00 Greek time, so I can have a look at the score if you want (just save it to PDF, instead of Finale or Sibelius format, so that other people can see it).

Also do see if other people chime in. I mean I'm one person, so I might have an opinion and others might have other opinions.


Its 5:02 here i have to deliver at 14:00, Im using NoteWorthy Composer i will take screenshot i can put here as jpg instead of pdf. I will update the thread until 07:00 for the score so you can look at the score for me.
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