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#1701652 - 06/25/11 04:58 AM
Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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I have been composing this piece since June 2010 and i finished today. Actually i finished it in April 2011 but i corrected some notes and it taken 3 more months to publish. Sorry for the sizzle in the recording my soundcard is a bit shoddy. You can directly listen from here http://www.box.net/files#/files/0/f/0/1/f_793968760or You can download the MP3 from here http://www.megaupload.com/?d=ZM4MSZWOAlso im selling the sheet music of it you can send pm to me for the detail.
Edited by Batuhan (06/25/11 05:01 AM)
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1701815 - 06/25/11 12:37 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Very short notice (and perhaps a bit upstraight and rude):
If you're selling the score you should at least find a way to offer a way for us to listen, without having to register on box.net (1st case) or wait 45 secs (megaupload case).
I'll be back with comments on the music, I promise, but I might be a tiny bit late! ^_^ Thank you i will upload to youtube i think thats the solution anyway waiting your comments.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1702069 - 06/25/11 10:41 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Dara]
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The Waltz is very beautiful. But it is very Chopin-esque and it doesn't strike me as very 'original' in that sense. However, it is a nicely developed work. I like it. I think next time you should try and develop more of your own style, rather than Chopin's.  By the way, does anyone have advice for synching video and audio together. I have a Zoom H4n, my digital camera and a Mac desktop. I haven't been able to figure out how to do this - not too computer savvy. My intention is to record solo piano with the Zoom and camera for visuals, then synch them together so i can upload to youtube with a decent quality presentation. I would just use a video editing program - Sony Vegas, Final Cut, Adobe Premiere, iMovie, etc. - and put the audio on the audio track and video on video track, and just do it by eye to get it synced. I don't know of any programs that can just do it for you.
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#1702080 - 06/25/11 11:04 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Even Chopin was heavily influenced by other composers, for example John Field.
So for me, it makes no difference if one has an 'original style' or not, as long as its new music and is pleasant then it should be fine.
I still didn’t listen to the music of this thread, because the link doesn’t work.
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#1702128 - 06/26/11 12:49 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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The megaupload link worked for me.
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#1702161 - 06/26/11 02:09 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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So for me, it makes no difference if one has an 'original style' or not, as long as its new music and is pleasant then it should be fine. Hem... weren't you the one who was ranting all over the place about a certain composer in PW made a work that sounded like Beethoven?  just sayin' ... Now, the box.net usually does offer a way to listen without registering, but in this case it asked me to register, which I didn't have the time to do. So I went to megaupload, which after 45 secs and a tiny bit of spam allowed me to listen to the music. It's a fine example of pastiche. It's lovely and I do think that many pianists would love to get ahold of the score and thus performing it. The fact that it reminds (all of us apparently) of Chopin is not bad on its own. Then again the very begin is VERY close to one of the valses of Chopin (but can't recall right now what). The work featured some beautiful embelishments and some lovely harmonization and for that alone is worth it!  The playing was also extra nice, which gives a bit more 'value' to the work... EDIT: Dara, the software mentioned above are VERY complicated and VERY expensive. There are other alternatives that can work for you. Even Windows Media Maker (I think this is what it's called) can make simple videos and add some music on top. You don't need anything fancy really... There was also a software from Techmedia which was available for free at some time, but it's no longer available. I'll do a little search for you and let you know.
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#1702195 - 06/26/11 04:25 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Nikolas]
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Then again the very begin is VERY close to one of the valses of Chopin (but can't recall right now what). Op.34 No.1? :P
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#1702230 - 06/26/11 06:54 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Thank you for your comments the megaupload link is working but you need to wait 40 seconds to download im uploading to the youtube right now.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1702263 - 06/26/11 08:29 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Nikolas]
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So for me, it makes no difference if one has an 'original style' or not, as long as its new music and is pleasant then it should be fine. Hem... weren't you the one who was ranting all over the place about a certain composer in PW made a work that sounded like Beethoven?  just sayin' ... Now, the box.net usually does offer a way to listen without registering, but in this case it asked me to register, which I didn't have the time to do. So I went to megaupload, which after 45 secs and a tiny bit of spam allowed me to listen to the music. It's a fine example of pastiche. It's lovely and I do think that many pianists would love to get ahold of the score and thus performing it. The fact that it reminds (all of us apparently) of Chopin is not bad on its own. Then again the very begin is VERY close to one of the valses of Chopin (but can't recall right now what). The work featured some beautiful embelishments and some lovely harmonization and for that alone is worth it!  The playing was also extra nice, which gives a bit more 'value' to the work... EDIT: Dara, the software mentioned above are VERY complicated and VERY expensive. There are other alternatives that can work for you. Even Windows Media Maker (I think this is what it's called) can make simple videos and add some music on top. You don't need anything fancy really... There was also a software from Techmedia which was available for free at some time, but it's no longer available. I'll do a little search for you and let you know. The criticism was not that it sounded like Beethoven, but it was bad music. If someone would compose music with the same quality of Beethoven but with new melodies, I wouldn’t mind that, in fact that would be nice, just look up Mendelssohn's B flat sonata written when he was 12. Sounding like Beethoven is not the problem, a bad copy is.
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#1702323 - 06/26/11 11:06 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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So for me, it makes no difference if one has an 'original style' or not, as long as its new music and is pleasant then it should be fine. Hem... weren't you the one who was ranting all over the place about a certain composer in PW made a work that sounded like Beethoven?  just sayin' ... Now, the box.net usually does offer a way to listen without registering, but in this case it asked me to register, which I didn't have the time to do. So I went to megaupload, which after 45 secs and a tiny bit of spam allowed me to listen to the music. It's a fine example of pastiche. It's lovely and I do think that many pianists would love to get ahold of the score and thus performing it. The fact that it reminds (all of us apparently) of Chopin is not bad on its own. Then again the very begin is VERY close to one of the valses of Chopin (but can't recall right now what). The work featured some beautiful embelishments and some lovely harmonization and for that alone is worth it!  The playing was also extra nice, which gives a bit more 'value' to the work... EDIT: Dara, the software mentioned above are VERY complicated and VERY expensive. There are other alternatives that can work for you. Even Windows Media Maker (I think this is what it's called) can make simple videos and add some music on top. You don't need anything fancy really... There was also a software from Techmedia which was available for free at some time, but it's no longer available. I'll do a little search for you and let you know. The criticism was not that it sounded like Beethoven, but it was bad music. If someone would compose music with the same quality of Beethoven but with new melodies, I wouldn’t mind that, in fact that would be nice, just look up Mendelssohn's B flat sonata written when he was 12. Sounding like Beethoven is not the problem, a bad copy is. Saul please dont argue with jelteon in my thread.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1702328 - 06/26/11 11:13 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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I was responding to Nikolas... not not Jelteon...
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#1703408 - 06/28/11 05:18 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Waiting other comments.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1703486 - 06/28/11 09:29 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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I'm still waiting to hear it from Youtube, but it seems like you didnt post it there yet...
Edited by Saul (06/28/11 09:30 AM)
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#1703640 - 06/28/11 02:30 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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I'm still waiting to hear it from Youtube, but it seems like you didnt post it there yet... Oh i added to youtube but forget to post the link here
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1703767 - 06/28/11 07:11 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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This is Yahoo not youtube, and it doesnt play a thing...
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#1703819 - 06/28/11 08:54 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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This is Yahoo not youtube, and it doesnt play a thing... here my account details for box.net username:vbatuhan@gmail.com password:777777 Anybody can listen if login. I have problem about youtube.
Edited by Batuhan (06/28/11 08:54 PM)
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1703844 - 06/28/11 09:33 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Edited by Saul (06/28/11 09:37 PM)
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#1703893 - 06/28/11 11:02 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement.
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Sorry for my English, I know it sucks, but I'm trying to improve.
Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1703919 - 06/28/11 11:39 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement. Hello, I said that I don't have a problem if you use his style, my only objection is with actual musical quotations from Chopin, I believe you need to easy it down a little , and try your best to create your own original melodies. If you'll do that, then I believe you have a chance to write something really good.
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#1704300 - 06/29/11 01:38 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement. Hello, I said that I don't have a problem if you use his style, my only objection is with actual musical quotations from Chopin, I believe you need to easy it down a little , and try your best to create your own original melodies. If you'll do that, then I believe you have a chance to write something really good. +1
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#1704328 - 06/29/11 02:22 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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Registered: 09/21/09
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Loc: Istanbul
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement. Hello, I said that I don't have a problem if you use his style, my only objection is with actual musical quotations from Chopin, I believe you need to easy it down a little , and try your best to create your own original melodies. If you'll do that, then I believe you have a chance to write something really good. You are talking like im copied the whole composition from Chopin's music but not thats wrong. I made very few quotations also the melodies are mine and original. If you are talking about rhythm similarity you are right but thats not an arrangement.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1704422 - 06/29/11 04:49 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement. Hello, I said that I don't have a problem if you use his style, my only objection is with actual musical quotations from Chopin, I believe you need to easy it down a little , and try your best to create your own original melodies. If you'll do that, then I believe you have a chance to write something really good. You are talking like im copied the whole composition from Chopin's music but not thats wrong. I made very few quotations also the melodies are mine and original. If you are talking about rhythm similarity you are right but thats not an arrangement. No I didn’t say that you copied the entire work from Chopin's music. I said that you edited Chopin's own music from the vast scattered compositions, and arranged it and put it together in a very cleaver and delightful way. It was done wonderfully as I said that its a good copy, but I wouldn’t call this finished product a new work, because of the vast quotations you have made from Chopin's output. I'm sorry but your 'original melodies' are not self evident, and are not obvious at all, I don’t hear them, for me its all Chopin. If you want to show some distinctive material, you need to go easy on the obvious and many quotations, and let your own melodies have center stage, but the melodies that you claim are yours have been drowned deep in this Chopin Soup, add some of your flavor to bring a New Taste, a taste we can recognize as truly yours and unique...
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#1704472 - 06/29/11 06:10 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Saul]
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Ok, I have listened to this piece, and these are my objective comments about it.
I think there is a huge difference between drawing inspiration and even sounding like a different composer here and there, and to sounding like him completely. This was not a bad copy but a good one, it actually did sound like Chopin, excuse me, It not only sounded like Chopin, but it was really 'Chopin', now I don’t suggest that you are his reincarnation for a second, but its something that he may have composed. But yet he didn’t, you composed it, drawing heavily and categorically from his music, and this is not just in style, character and motif usage, but actually quoting entire passages, and linking some of his ideas here and there and then tying it together into a new composition.
Yes Chopin didn’t compose this music the way it is, but he did compose this music though not in the same order. Meaning, I believe that you took entire parts of his music, and edited them , arranged them and presented them as your 'own composition', when the truth is that the arrangement of the music is yours, but I don’t think that those parts of music, those little scattered ideas of Chopin, are the fruits of your labor.
When I say that I don't mind if a composer sounds like a another composer as long as its new music, I meant to say that as long as the content , the music itself is yours completely, I don’t mind it if you have written it in another composer's style. But 'Style' and 'Music' are not the same. I'm against this glaring and obvious composer quotations.
Yes you have succeeded in putting different parts of Chopin's music in a cleaver way presenting it as your own original work, but for me, this is not a new composition per say, but an interesting arrangement of Chopin's own music.
So, I would be delighted to hear your own melodies even if they will be written in the style of Chopin, but the way it is now, I wouldn’t call this an original work, but an original arrangement of Chopin's music.
Now about the playing, I actually enjoyed your performance, it was interesting and engaging, and also lyrical.
Regards,
Saul
Thanks for your comments, Chopin did this too, if you know. His style comes from the John Field and Johann Nepomuk Hummel, so copying Chopin's style is not a wrong i think. I love his music even adore like a religion. My purpose is adding more compositions to the romantic piano repertoire. And composing some new pieces in the style of Chopin, like Chopin did in the style of Field and Hummel. If you listen Hummel Piano Concertos especially the fifth one, you can hear the passages that Chopin changed and used in his piano concerto no. 1 second movement. Hello, I said that I don't have a problem if you use his style, my only objection is with actual musical quotations from Chopin, I believe you need to easy it down a little , and try your best to create your own original melodies. If you'll do that, then I believe you have a chance to write something really good. You are talking like im copied the whole composition from Chopin's music but not thats wrong. I made very few quotations also the melodies are mine and original. If you are talking about rhythm similarity you are right but thats not an arrangement. No I didn’t say that you copied the entire work from Chopin's music. I said that you edited Chopin's own music from the vast scattered compositions, and arranged it and put it together in a very cleaver and delightful way. It was done wonderfully as I said that its a good copy, but I wouldn’t call this finished product a new work, because of the vast quotations you have made from Chopin's output. I'm sorry but your 'original melodies' are not self evident, and are not obvious at all, I don’t hear them, for me its all Chopin. If you want to show some distinctive material, you need to go easy on the obvious and many quotations, and let your own melodies have center stage, but the melodies that you claim are yours have been drowned deep in this Chopin Soup, add some of your flavor to bring a New Taste, a taste we can recognize as truly yours and unique... My purpose is composing pieces that sounds like Chopin. Im at the behind of Chopin i dont wanna be famous or something like that im just finding hidden Chopin compositions in the nature and write them on the paper. I dont wanna develop my own style. I want just sound like Chopin.
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Sorry for my English, I know it sucks, but I'm trying to improve.
Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1704497 - 06/29/11 06:59 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Ok, you can do whatever you wish...
Cheers,
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#1704752 - 06/30/11 06:18 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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My purpose is composing pieces that sounds like Chopin. Im at the behind of Chopin i dont wanna be famous or something like that im just finding hidden Chopin compositions in the nature and write them on the paper. I dont wanna develop my own style. I want just sound like Chopin. Sorry, I respect what you are trying to do, but why not just play Chopin? I don't see the point in trying to be Chopin.
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#1704759 - 06/30/11 06:42 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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My purpose is composing pieces that sounds like Chopin. Im at the behind of Chopin i dont wanna be famous or something like that im just finding hidden Chopin compositions in the nature and write them on the paper. I dont wanna develop my own style. I want just sound like Chopin. Sorry, I respect what you are trying to do, but why not just play Chopin? I don't see the point in trying to be Chopin. Im not trying to be Chopin, im just composing a new and fresh pieces in the style of Chopin. I cant be him thats impossible im not a genius i just love him very much and im using his style to compose beautiful music. And i think people pleased to hear.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1704766 - 06/30/11 07:06 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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My purpose is composing pieces that sounds like Chopin. Im at the behind of Chopin i dont wanna be famous or something like that im just finding hidden Chopin compositions in the nature and write them on the paper. I dont wanna develop my own style. I want just sound like Chopin. Sorry, I respect what you are trying to do, but why not just play Chopin? I don't see the point in trying to be Chopin. Im not trying to be Chopin, im just composing a new and fresh pieces in the style of Chopin. I cant be him thats impossible im not a genius i just love him very much and im using his style to compose beautiful music. And i think people pleased to hear. Fair enough. But remember: to create art like Chopin did, you must find, trust, believe in and be honest to only yourself. Until then, you can only be a 'Sunday painter.'
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#1707508 - 07/04/11 10:08 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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I'm very impressed with your waltz. It did sound a bit like Chopin, but that's a good thing as far as I'm concerned.
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#1708853 - 07/07/11 02:36 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Very nice piece. Although it did sound a lot like Chopin, I do believe that there was a bit of originality in there.
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#1712524 - 07/13/11 10:11 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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I think you are right on this one, but I also think that there is another Chopin waltz that is somewhat being represented here as well. But i can't quite remember which one it is either.
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#1720499 - 07/25/11 10:29 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Very nice piece. Although it did sound a lot like Chopin, I do believe that there was a bit of originality in there. Thanks
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1723869 - 07/31/11 12:58 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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More, please. By the way, are there actually 35 opuses before this waltz of yours? I think it's good. But the melody is barely memorable to me. (Like some of Chopin's lesser music) I think you should keep going. Im not trying to be Chopin, im just composing a new and fresh pieces in the style of Chopin. I cant be him thats impossible im not a genius i just love him very much and im using his style to compose beautiful music. For God's sake, aim higher, man. You've written this, are you saying this is the best you can do? You think this is the pinnacle of "new and fresh" in Chopin style? Is there no room for improvement left anymore? It's very cool to hear, but I wouldn't pay a dime for it yet. It's not that great. (Nor is there anything posted on this forum I would pay for, as far as I've seen) I loved the thread you started in march "Chopin and Perfection". I think this said it all: I mean perfect harmonization and great melodies they are touching hearts directly before the brain. Of course, there were just a load of intellectual responses; none of which actually answered the question: How do you get into the state of mind you need to write from the heart/pure emotion, as opposed to from (and thus, to) the brain? I know I can, when in certain moods, easily write 2-4 measures of music from the heart. Then, I start thinking about where it should go, what would sound right behind it, and it becomes crap. Well, crap? Brain-music. I know I FEEL music in me that can reach Chopin-quality. I just don't know how to translate it. Yet. I'll be following you if you decide to post more stuff.
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#1724044 - 07/31/11 02:12 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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More, please. By the way, are there actually 35 opuses before this waltz of yours? I think it's good. But the melody is barely memorable to me. (Like some of Chopin's lesser music) I think you should keep going. Im not trying to be Chopin, im just composing a new and fresh pieces in the style of Chopin. I cant be him thats impossible im not a genius i just love him very much and im using his style to compose beautiful music. For God's sake, aim higher, man. You've written this, are you saying this is the best you can do? You think this is the pinnacle of "new and fresh" in Chopin style? Is there no room for improvement left anymore? It's very cool to hear, but I wouldn't pay a dime for it yet. It's not that great. (Nor is there anything posted on this forum I would pay for, as far as I've seen) I loved the thread you started in march "Chopin and Perfection". I think this said it all: I mean perfect harmonization and great melodies they are touching hearts directly before the brain. Of course, there were just a load of intellectual responses; none of which actually answered the question: How do you get into the state of mind you need to write from the heart/pure emotion, as opposed to from (and thus, to) the brain? I know I can, when in certain moods, easily write 2-4 measures of music from the heart. Then, I start thinking about where it should go, what would sound right behind it, and it becomes crap. Well, crap? Brain-music. I know I FEEL music in me that can reach Chopin-quality. I just don't know how to translate it. Yet. I'll be following you if you decide to post more stuff. I will post a Polonaise in B-flat major in 2 days. Yes there are 35 opuses before this waltz but they are not ready to publish.
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1724163 - 07/31/11 07:33 PM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Great job Batuhan ! you're a really good artist! I'm sure you would have been a great Chopin pupil!
Edited by Lluís (07/31/11 07:34 PM)
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#1753970 - 09/17/11 06:46 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Great job Batuhan ! you're a really good artist! I'm sure you would have been a great Chopin pupil! I can give my everything to be a Chopin's pupil i wish i was born in 19th century.
Edited by Batuhan (09/17/11 06:47 AM)
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Published: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major, 2 Preludes, Op. 12 in D-flat major.
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#1756422 - 09/21/11 07:28 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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Hats off, gentlemen! A genius.
Note: Renew your box.net link.
Edited by JAROSŁAW (09/21/11 07:45 AM)
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#1756470 - 09/21/11 09:24 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
[Re: Batuhan]
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I don't see the problem with sounding just like Chopin at all, it's a sign of skill that one can replicate the style of other composers, and the more authentically this can be done, the more skill the composer has. Being original just for the sake of being original is silly. To my instinct it would be detrimental to one's development as a composer to try to be original early on - copying the techniques of other composers is how one learns.
Anyway, I've only listened to half the piece so far, but the handling of Chopinesque, mid-Romantic harmony is strong, he has a great feel for the Chopin style. Also, his playing of it is enjoyable!
Edited by Psychic Ravel (09/21/11 09:26 AM)
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#1757844 - 09/23/11 06:19 AM
Re: Waltz Op. 36 No. 1 in G-flat major
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Being original just for the sake of being original is silly. Copying Chopin just for the sake of copying Chopin is even more silly, in my opinion.
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