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Hey there forum.

I just started out composing some piano pieces and would really appreciate any feedback you may have. I'm new to this whole thing so they may not be the most impressive pieces but I am proud of them!

I had a third piece which I attempted to do in the Lydian Scale of A but that was a disaster, though I might release it soon.

Anyway below are links to two pieces, I would really love some feedback from you guys =)

Thanks!


Sian - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1AomsjwiwKg&noredirect=1

Alone - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g-baWX9iYP4

I see you put your heart into your music, that I liked very much.
I personally did not like how you sped up the tempo halfway on the song, maybe you can create the effect your were looking for by making fuller chords or harmonically or what other thing you can think of.
Keep at it, one of the greatest discoveries is music, and one the the greatest inventions is the piano!

Daniel