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#1874584 - 04/06/12 09:44 AM Opinions on this Original Piece?
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Registered: 04/05/12
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I recently wrote this piece and would be interested to hear opinions on it (first piece of music I have composed)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2lVVYj5nr4A&feature=relmfu
Thanks,
Carl
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#1874591 - 04/06/12 09:57 AM Re: Opinions on this Original Piece? [Re: carlosj116]
Batuhan Offline
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Did you study counterpoint? Cause there are many mistakes in your composition. But It's your first attempt I can ignore anyway good work.
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#1874592 - 04/06/12 09:59 AM Re: Opinions on this Original Piece? [Re: carlosj116]
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No, i just wanted it to sound that way, but didnt use full counterpoint. the dissonance and diminishment was intended also.
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