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#1940661 - 08/11/12 01:07 AM Away from Earth (Original Composition)
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Registered: 12/19/11
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Here's a composition of mine I wrote a few years back.

Sorry for the sloppy performance of it, I recorded it back when I was 12, when I wasn't as strong of a piano player. Let me know what you all think of my piece anyway. grin

Thanks!



Edited by Dachshund (08/11/12 01:13 AM)
Edit Reason: needed to fix the link

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#1942295 - 08/13/12 11:47 PM Re: Away from Earth (Original Composition) [Re: Dachshund]
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nobody?

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#1943371 - 08/15/12 07:24 PM Re: Away from Earth (Original Composition) [Re: Dachshund]
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good!

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#1943657 - 08/16/12 10:12 AM Re: Away from Earth (Original Composition) [Re: Dachshund]
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It didn't strike me as sloppy playing at all; I thought it was a excellent performance. From a composition standpoint, my only advice would be to let the music breathe a little, if that makes sense. There are several good ideas that sometimes seem to run into one another fighting for attention. That's just a minor critique. For writing this at such a young age, I have to say well done, and keep up the good work. At 12 years old I was sitting around the house playing Super Mario Bros.
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