I just wrote this out - what do you think

This is how it sounds

I think that this is lovely. And yes, I like complicated stuff, dissonance, etc, but this has a very tender nature that I enjoyed!

A couple of comments on the score if I may:

1. Tempo and tempo alterations go ABOVE both staves, not in the middle (molto rit.... in the end).

2. The held note in the previous to last bar could be a separate voice/layer, which would made so much more sense..

3. comments on how to play something most usually go between staves. Especially things like 'dolce'. It's so out there that it seems it's in the middle of space...

And an off comment...

I think that this piece would go well in the JANUARY depository... Perhaps next month with a new piece? (<-talk about pressure, right? :P)

Thanks for you comments Nikolas.
I shall edit them.
I'm just getting the hang of using Sibelius.
I've got loads more to post.