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#2022230 - 01/27/13 02:47 PM My new song
1wiki1 Offline
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Registered: 09/28/12
Posts: 19
hello guys, smile
IĀ“ve decided to post my new piano song on youtube, I would like to hear your opinion. Im just a beginner in composing. There are some little mistakes, so do not care about them :P . Thank you & I hope you will like it smile

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CUHQD4d2imk

DonĀ“t be afraid to comment, I would love to see your opinions smile
Thank you!


Edited by 1wiki1 (01/27/13 02:59 PM)

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#2024601 - 01/31/13 11:41 AM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
rada Offline
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Registered: 09/07/06
Posts: 1124
Loc: pagosa springs,co
Hi 1wiki1,
Well my first impression was that it did sound very dark so it certainly seems like the title fit. I would categorize it into the 'new-age' because of your repetitive left hand. I didn't feel like it had any development and it sounded a little like you were unsure around 1:30.....but I listened to the whole thing and I was interested. I noticed you had a lot of hits but no comments.

rada

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#2024623 - 01/31/13 12:15 PM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
GregSTB Offline
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Registered: 11/16/12
Posts: 26
I like your idea very much. I don't care about the mistakes too. That'll fix itself overtime haha.

What i really wanted as a listener is the build up to be more subtle, u know? It went by me so fast. I wanted to enjoy it more. Perhaps a cool idea is to extend the beginning as that is a really nice sound that made me not click X in the upper right corner :-D You had my attention so that's a job well done haha. Make the build up more "epic?" I don't know how to explain myself right now. A little more variety in contrast leading up to the climax would definitely bring your composition justice i feel.

Keep on writing.

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#2024931 - 01/31/13 10:54 PM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
Sandra M Offline
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Registered: 05/09/11
Posts: 56
Your new song. The song sounds suitable for a movie, the background to a dark storm type night. I enjoyed all the composition until you went in to the contrast, bridge, usually 8 bars twice then the bridge of 8 bars then ending with 8 bars as the first two 8 bars. Usually 32 bars total. The bridge being the different of the 4 parts. There are no set rules but it was too out of balance for my taste. I loved the 3 parts the same but think about a different bridge you like yourself. It did not sound grounded with enough substance for my taste. I felt a let down there and then when you returned I felt fine again. More drama would be good for your contast and then return to the same for your ending. Someone stated New Age sounding and I agree with them. I hear talent. Sandra M

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#2026084 - 02/02/13 10:46 PM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
Schubertslieder Offline
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Registered: 02/02/13
Posts: 373
Loc: Michigan, USA
I will be interested to know if chord progressin was not much of a concern in this New Age piece. It is highly repetitive, particularly on the accompaniment. The melody did portray the darkness for me.
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#2045544 - 03/09/13 03:14 PM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
1wiki1 Offline
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Registered: 09/28/12
Posts: 19
smile Thank you for all your comments!!
Im just a beginner, I composed some songs before, but I couldnĀ“t play piano very well at that time haha. I really appreciate all your comments and advises! I will try to make even better music. Thank you!

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#2060246 - 04/06/13 08:37 AM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
alexpol Offline
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Registered: 04/04/13
Posts: 5
Loc: Banned
Very very thanks.I did really enjoy this.I want to appreciate this.
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#2060841 - 04/07/13 04:09 PM Re: My new song [Re: 1wiki1]
Cmin Offline
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Registered: 02/19/13
Posts: 268
Loc: Swabia
Wow. It did remind me of a dark road to somewhere... Nice. Don't give up.
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