I'm kinda new here, so I drop by to comment, although this post seems inactive for a month now. I hope you guys dont mind
I like it. The motive is nicely developed, and I very much like the imitative accompaniment of the left hand the piece starts with. The interplay works very well.
That brings me to a minor quarrel I have with ms 12 and I think I saw it somewhere else as well. There is a tenor and soprano voice moving in parallel 2nds. Nothing wrong with that in itself, but it blurs the interplay of the voices that worked in previous measures so well...
Sightreading this piece, I get a good sense of the harmonies. The pacing of the work however is harder for me to determine. I dont mind meter changes at all, but I am not sure if they work. Sit back and let the music play, works better for me to in this regard.
BTW I think the 1/4 measures are meant as the pickupmeasure, in that case I should add them to the previous measure. For example, change ms 15 and 16 to one 5/4 measure (like you did in ms 25)
anyway thanks for sharing. I hope these comments are a bit helpful.