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#2224649 - 02/02/14 01:43 PM Take Me Away
Black Gloss Offline
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Registered: 01/25/14
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Loc: United Kingdom
Hey guys


Am pretty new to the forum but have been playing piano for quite a few years. This is my first full composition that I finished a couple of years back but only uploaded last summer. You can take a listen at:

Take Me Away (Youtube)

I didn't really have a style or structure in mind when I started, it just kinda came together in my head and from messing around.

Anyway let me know what you think below!

Thanks

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#2224668 - 02/02/14 02:23 PM Re: Take Me Away [Re: Black Gloss]
JoelW Online   content
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It flows well, and has a nice contrasting middle section, but overall it's pretty generic and boring to my taste. You don't listen to classical music assume?

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#2225923 - 02/04/14 05:56 PM Re: Take Me Away [Re: Black Gloss]
Steve Chandler Offline
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I agree with Joel on this one. I found myself wishing Black Gloss had used a different photo of the same woman coming out of the water as inspiration for this piece. Okay, I'm being a bit harsh I like the middle section more, ARGH you're back to the diddling of the first section. Fortunately, that part was pretty short. I did like the middle section take that and make that its own piece.

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#2226438 - 02/05/14 04:49 PM Re: Take Me Away [Re: Black Gloss]
Black Gloss Offline
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Thanks guys, appreciate the feedback. Might try out your suggestion Steve, I agree I like the middle section more

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