Thank you for sharing this. It was quite an enjoyable piece and it sounded both creative and unique. I liked the combination of jazz and classical elements in it that gave it a fun, almost Copland feel.
The only major critique I would have was that I felt the piece was a little too compacted. I would've like to hear each idea breathe a little more, as the rapid transition from one melody to the next seemed a tad awkward at times. I really felt that the piece would be more suitable in a longer length, where each movement can be properly introduced.
Like the others I enjoyed this piece, especially that it was accompanied by a recording. It struck me as a bit of a bagatelle. I agree with the sentiment that a plethora of ideas come and go quickly and that the piece might be more successful overall if each section was expanded on a bit.
However, this was a very nice piece of music and I enjoyed your recording very much. Please post more of your works in the future.
Surely you jest! I don't want to discourage Polyphonist from posting, but this comment reminded me of one made by a famous conductor about trombones. He said "Never look at the trombones, it only encourages them!" Given the copious pieces Polyphonist has posted in the last month I don't think we need to worry about his being prolific.
Seriously Polyphonist keep up the good work!
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