Hello i´ve made a piece and i posted here and one of the things that you said is that it was very predictable. So i made another and i hope it is less prdictable.
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P.S: i forgot to change the pedal before the last pedal so it is dissonance, but i liked the rest so i posted anyway.
I'm not sure what you PS means the end sounded fine but I wasn't listening very closely. Your piece is nice enough and it is less predictable so you're making progress. I understand that you're interested in improving your compositions, but you have to find your own voice. That means being the best you that you can be and always seeking to improve. Your style of music is not so much to my taste, but another composer posted a piece in a similar style and I very much enjoyed his piece.
It's not my intent to discourage you, but to make you try harder. The hardest thing for composers is learning to be your own worst critic. Rework your musical ideas until there's no further improvement to be found. Then ask yourself if it's good enough (it may not be).