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#2445355 - 07/29/15 12:00 AM original composition, opinion?
pianistforever238 Offline
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Registered: 07/27/15
Posts: 6
Hello

I recently started composing piano pieces and would like to get some feedback on my latest melody
Any comment is apreciated ! smile

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DLBgi83pRH8

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#2446002 - 07/30/15 06:28 PM Re: original composition, opinion? [Re: pianistforever238]
tks184 Offline
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Registered: 02/05/13
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I loved it! Great melody and everything! One suggestion, perhaps stick some more chords in, maybe some secondary dominants or sevenths? The chords progression became very predictable. Congratulations on a great job! smile

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#2446107 - 07/30/15 11:37 PM Re: original composition, opinion? [Re: tks184]
pianistforever238 Offline
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Registered: 07/27/15
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thank you so much! smile I really appreciate your feedback

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