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Posted By: MVshabeer2 Original Composition - no title yet - 10/10/13 01:15 PM
Here is my 3rd composition(new age)

no title yet. Just a quick record

Comments & constructive critics are welcome

Two pianos, please tell me which piano suits the music

Also please tell me what kind of mood does the song reflects for you

on Yamaha
https://soundcloud.com/mvshabeer/notitle-original-composition

on Steinway

https://soundcloud.com/mvshabeer/notitle-original-composition-1

Posted By: Brian_R Re: Original Composition - no title yet - 10/10/13 05:02 PM
I love it.

I prefer the Steinway, but I'm always biased toward Steinway in anything but Top 40 / Pop music where the Yamaha's bright sparkle is more appropriate.

Mood: It sounds like somebody lost something of value. An old watch, a pendant or necklace, something small & irreplaceable. Now they are sitting on an old wooden chest starring out a window thinking about how much it meant to them and the fact that its gone... or at least seems to be, at present.
Posted By: MVshabeer2 Re: Original Composition - no title yet - 10/10/13 09:42 PM
Thanks for the feedback Brian, I am glad that I have conveyed the mood I meant to this song. smile
Posted By: rada Re: Original Composition - no title yet - 10/11/13 06:47 PM
maybe you could call it 'mysterioso'....it reminds me somewhat of the style of Richard Clayderman....I liked it but I really liked how you used the 'faint' strings.

rada

sorry only listened to the first one...
Posted By: ChopinAddict Re: Original Composition - no title yet - 10/14/13 05:16 AM
It has a touch of sadness I love (although it is not only sadness, but also something like resignation and maybe a new beginning/hope).
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